Comments | xanateria: Lost and Found

xanateria

Nov 16, 2011 16:07

See Master Post for story info
( This way to part one )

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Sentinal Big Bang amalia21_6 February 20 2012, 02:41:36 UTC

This is so good so far. I like how it goes from Jim to Blair. It makes it more instering.

Re: Sentinal Big Bang xanateria February 20 2012, 06:36:54 UTC

:D Glad you like it so far. I wondered if people would appreciate the alternating POV, so nice to know it works for you. Thanks so much for feedback.