Ah, progress...

[xandras_coffee]

So, to get back into the habit of keeping this stupid thing updated, I'm gonna start keeping progress notes here. x3 For anybody wondering how DI's facelift is going. =3

Details under the cut, along with a link to chapter one (and a spiffy pic of the chapter cover! x3)

Comments

[yurameki_tenshi]

x33!!! Ooooh, I've read half of it so far(only half because now I have to go get some dinner with some friends!), and I'm falling in love with it all over again! ^_^~

xD And loving the Y!gallery/chapter cover for it

<3

di

[anonymous]

i am so glad your going to keep writting the story. i was so sad when it stopped updateing.

[anonymous]

Adrian. It’s a beautiful name, isn’t it? The sound if it is alluring, aristocratic, graceful, and yet dark-almost intoxicating. Some names just fit their owners so well.

It doesn't bode well for you or the re-written version that there's a mistake in first paragraph. I'm not trying to be harsh, because DI is a good story. It would, however, benefit from a second opinion via a good beta reader. Most published writers use editors to improve their material. Literature wouldn't be half as good without those unsung heroes.

Congratulations on continuing it, though. I hope you do the same with "For Love of Evil" one day too.

[xandras_coffee]

Thank you for pointing that out--although, for the record, I have two beta readers I use, and neither of them caught that. You're the first to have seen it out of everyone who's read it so far, actually.

I've fixed it. I appreciate it.

[anonymous]

When I found out that DI was being rewritten, the first thing I did was inform my friend of it. We were both avid readers of this story, and were both saddened to see the lack of updates.

This is great news. : ) Thank you. ^^

[odangohead]

Hey Xana-chan! Long time no chat! It's good to hear that you're getting back into DI again. I was just thinking about it the other day. I can't wait to read the re-vamped stuff, and eventually the rest of the story again. Best of luck!!!