Fic: Wolf, In the Morning (dS, Dief, some F/K)

[xanphibian]

Title: Wolf, In The Morning
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Um. Well, this is a Diefenbaker fic, but there's some F/K
Rating: G
Summary: See title. *g*

Comments

[j_s_cavalcante]

Diefenbaker fic! This is adorable. I like Dief's dry, matter-of-fact wolfy voice. Love how he mooches the muffins off Ray's neighbor. It's also cool that he can gauge the level of Ray's irritation from the vibrations--at a distance, even. Smart wolf.

The copy's so clean that I figured you'd want to know there's a word missing in this sentence:

(Cats are almost as fun as rabbits, but there aren’t any rabbits here in this strange place my friend and I now live.)

Should be "...in this strange place where my friend and I now live" ("in which" is OK, too) or "...in this strange place my friend and I now live in."

Also, since Dief's English is so grammatical, maybe he'd want this to be perfect, too: "She does not know whom she is dealing with."

I love how Ray's concerns are just not important when there are muffins or there's a cat. That is so Dief! Here's another great bit:

I put my head on my paws. This is just great. Outsmarted by a cat

[xanphibian]

Thank you for spotting my spotty grammar! :) I'm so happy you liked this. Thanks for the feedback. *twirls*

[pearl_o]

Cat, cat, cat! My blood is thrumming with the thrill of the hunt. I am a WOLF!

Awww, yay, DIEF.

[xanphibian]

*giggles* I love how your icon is hiding from him.

*licks*

[broken_kite]

This is crazy funny, I love Dief's voice and his inner monologue as he's running after the cat manipulating people into giving him what he wants.

[xanphibian]

Thank you so much! :)

[chuckjd]

Aw Dief! I love your Dief!

This is just the cutest damn story ever and really appreciated right now. Definitely exactly what I needed. Whew!

[xanphibian]

:) I'm happy to make you feel better. Thank you for letting me know you like it!

[dorrie6]

I was pointed here by a friend, and I just wanted to let you know that this is the dearest thing, and that it has made my evening to have read it.

[xanphibian]

Thank you so much! And I thank your friend, as well. :)