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I dunno... rhymes kinda
Apr 18, 2005 23:18
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brighteyes_soul
April 23 2005, 01:40:51 UTC
I like how you started off the poem with the "grabbing the sand" part, and then tied in the sand at the end. I wasn't expecting that. Really well done.
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xanthral
April 23 2005, 22:22:16 UTC
Thanks Cola :)
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