a poem i just wrote. . .

[xaosgod]

it took me a while to get it out right, but i kinda like it. much to my chagrin, it turned into a sonnet. i hope you all enjoy, too

Comments

[catherine_sarah]

As a fellow poet I am going to say: I like this. I like the fact that it's descriptive and active.

[aevumcaruivos]

It IS neatly written. But I'm ambivalent to technology so I'm kinda bias against the content...
I hate putting references to technology in my poetry. It's funny, I hadn't realized how much so until the one time I actually mentioned my computer and stuff. Silly.

But that does not take any from the literary aspect, of course! And as I said, it is neat. Good imagery.

-me.

[sarue]

Not Bad
Just be glad you don't have to teach me Middle English anymore!!!

Re:

[xaosgod]

what? you still not liking the

whan that aprill with his shoures soute?

[kelly_bean]

I like it.