simple... effective

[xavier65]

when you are not around, i get uneasy and cold
when i cannot hold you, my arms feel useless
when i cannot hear you, i go insane
when i cannot kiss you, i miss life

when you are close, i get excited and bold
when i hold you, my heart flutters in unrest
when i hear you, i calm my brain
when i kiss you, i loose all strife

Comments

[greencorrine]

The meaning is sweet, but the expression goes beyond simple into the cliche.

[xavier65]

cliche is kinda what i went for there...

i'm cheesy, what can i say XP

[spookycheerios]

I like it XP It's sweet.

[anonymous]

Very sweet piece Charlie X. See you at the Bridge:D