No One.

[xbetheminority]

Title: No One.
Author: Seven... well, Me.
Rating: R. I don't think NC-17.
Pairing: Billie Joe/Mike
Disclaimer: Not real, don't sue. Fan Fiction.
Summary: A little something I built off of inspiration. o_O
Notes: Long. Seven and a half Word pages. Good, although I think it's a little rushed towards the end. Lemme' know what you think. ^_^

No one

Comments

[_castaway_1234]

Holy fuck!!
That was like...sensational!!
It was realistic and just...*memories*

[xbetheminority]

Yay! I like the more speechless comments. Fun to read, and yay!

I've been memed.

Woo!

[slashy_girl]

*__________* that was so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a great work, you wrie really well, you're great!!!! ^^
but it's still sad! =(
great work anyway! ^^

[xbetheminority]

It was sad. And I wish it coulda' been happier, but then where's the emotion? I mean, sadness is a very strong emotion to reckon with.

[slashy_girl]

oh yes, sadness is one of the strongest emotions a man can feel... and Mikey knows it pretty well, I guess, poor baby! =D
anyway, you really did a great job! ^^
will you write a second part of this or will you leave this as a standalone?

[xbetheminority]

Standalone. I will give anyone who reads this a hint as to the next thing I'm writing. There will be 12 parts.

That's all I'm telling you.

[foeniyx]

Aww omgg... So sad but SO GOOD!
Poor Billie and Mike... And Adie for that matter.
But this is beautiful!

[xbetheminority]

Eek! I never thought to call it beautiful persay.

I'm glad you thought it though. ^_^

[suebot]

I reallt loved the line
like a snowflake perched on a fingertip, she disappeared from sight
So simple and so perfect.
I really liked this.

[xbetheminority]

Yes, I loved that line!

When I thought of it, I was like, "Gah. That's perfect."

Glad you liked. =]

[jesus_of_port_t]

aww that was really good, and I think the ending was perfect! I'm glad Mikey didn't die! :0 :D Your an amazing author!

[xbetheminority]

I COULD NEVER KILL MIKEY! I love him way too much.