It was said to me last time that I gave horrible feedback. However, regardless of that, I'm going to tell you what I think.
I like where it's going very much, and it does make sense. It's slightly chaotic, which works well considering the situation Traci is in.
However, there are MANY spelling/grammar mistakes that I think you should go back and fix. It takes away from the story (at least for grammar Nazis like myself).
i wasn't sure when you stated, "should i make it worth something?" can you elaborate?? other than that, it is chaotic, but then again so is the thought process in a situation of this sort. :)
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I like where it's going very much, and it does make sense. It's slightly chaotic, which works well considering the situation Traci is in.
However, there are MANY spelling/grammar mistakes that I think you should go back and fix. It takes away from the story (at least for grammar Nazis like myself).
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more, more, more!
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