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Mar 08, 2005 19:48
A week and a half of heavan but now it is no more.
No nothing bad happened, its a joke so dont worry if you dont get it
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laurens_trips
March 9 2005, 05:01:19 UTC
Grammar check:
"A week and a half of HEAVEN, but now it is no more. No, nothing bad happened. It's a joke, so don't worry if you don't get it."
Little sis, punctuation and spelling. Please.
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xc4everlax
March 9 2005, 05:02:54 UTC
Sorry Miss Lauren!
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laurens_trips
March 9 2005, 05:07:17 UTC
Again, Carolyn, you need to focus on your grammar:
Sorry, Miss Lauren!
You forgot the comma.
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xc4everlax
March 9 2005, 06:33:24 UTC
well, the comma is going to have to get over it!
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"A week and a half of HEAVEN, but now it is no more. No, nothing bad happened. It's a joke, so don't worry if you don't get it."
Little sis, punctuation and spelling. Please.
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Sorry, Miss Lauren!
You forgot the comma.
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