Belated birthday gift for Aabass89

May 27, 2009 20:46

AAH, I hope you're still in the country to be able to read this. I heard you were leaving to a place with no internet...>_<;; Ahhh this is what I get for procrastinating...

Anyway, I finally finished it!!

Title: Only look at me
Genre: jealous puppies
Pairing: Yamapi // Maki // JaeJoong
Rating: PG
Words: 1,361
Notes: Song by Big Bang’s Tae Yang, ( Read more... )

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our_scars May 28 2009, 02:45:05 UTC
FIRST!!!

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our_scars May 28 2009, 02:46:05 UTC
LOL, I'm not reading it, but I wanted to be the first comment anyway...
Mwahahahahaah~

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xcry May 28 2009, 02:48:35 UTC
haha, as usual. <333

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An update! [Dances with joy] redsn0wflakes May 28 2009, 06:00:56 UTC
It's been so long! I miss you!

The first one was epicness. Jealous!Pi and fangirl!Maki is just adorable. Jaejoong? Not too sure what I think about him, since he did make Maki cry. But since he's so damn hot it's hard to stay mad at him. And Yunho making a cameo, being the super-cool leader? I love you! And the structure of the entire fic was just awesome...how we saw the entire event through multiple people's perspective let us be a little less biased (no matter how much I love Jaejoong Yamaki is always first xD).

Oh, and I just loved the little "Yamapi-hyung~" That was just too cute. xD

Your second was so sad. I always get so mad at YiJung for being such a jackass sometimes. But at the same time, he's so pitiful it's hard to stay mad. T___T

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Re: An update! [Dances with joy] xcry June 8 2009, 17:48:23 UTC
Sorry for the late response...been very busy this month...

Anyway, yeah, I totally butchered the konglish language, haha. But yes, I always dream that if Jaejoong was to meet Yamaki, he would be respective of Pi, even though he's glaring Jaejoong down for taking Maki for the night, haha.

Yi Jung? Ahh, why do I keep messing up their names? Haha, but yes, I had that idea in my head for a while, and thought maybe he WOULD do that to Ga Eul sooner or later.

But really, I just loove the BOF ending...kinda...you know, the one that is Five years later into their life and in the end he says, "Ga Eul, will you be my flower forever?" I LITERALLY DIED.

SO CUTE. Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting, as always... <33

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aabass89 May 28 2009, 06:19:22 UTC
I'm flailing.. FALILING!!!!! can you see me???? it's awesomeness in epik proportion. I just love it so much.
Jaejoong evil mischievous smile, I can just piture it, you know.
your writing is so much better. do write more... *puppy eyes*
and I'm leaving tomorrow!!!!!! 3 weeks without internet.. I don't know if I can stand it.

have I mentioned that I loved the fic so freaking much????? teehee... MORE!!!!!

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xcry June 8 2009, 17:49:34 UTC
Ahh So very very very sorry for teh response...But anyway, I'm soo glad you loved this fic. I wasn't sure if I should write an AU or just another Jealous!Pi fic with a little JaeMaki, haha.

But what's done is done.

I hope you come back safely! I MISSERS YOU ALREADY.

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risenjatuh May 28 2009, 07:44:40 UTC
I like how Yamapi is referred to as the guy with the ugly perm.. lol. He really needs to lose the perm especially when being compared to Tohoshinki because he just can't win with how he looks now. Also like how each pov kind of describes their own character.
This fic is just awesome!!! and adding Yunho <3
and as much as I love JaeJoong/Maki, I'm glad that Maki ran after Pi in the end... that's the power of Yamaki!

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xcry June 8 2009, 17:51:44 UTC
Sorry for the late response, been really busy...

Haha, yes, I couldn't help it. Pi needs to get his ahjusshi hair cut and bring back the cute haircut from 2007-2008.

Yes, I will always end everything with Yamaki, because it would be too sad if I did anything else.

And even if I did, that would mean more to write until Yamaki is the end result, haha. But I'm too lazy.

Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting, loves you for it. <33

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ruing May 28 2009, 08:59:56 UTC
yay! I've been waiting for this! hehehe! Pi being jealous is gold!
*laughs* Meisa the witch... a hot witch at that!
kyaa so cute, Jaejoong really is the definition of "pretty boy"
but Yamapi wins! YATTA! *cheer* hehehe, a die hard yamaki fan, yes i am...

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xcry June 8 2009, 17:53:06 UTC
Sorry for teh late response, been busy...

Yes, Meisa IS a HAWT WITCH...which I TOTALLY want to see now, as a drama! Haha.

Yes, Yamaki first, Yamaki last. Hehe...

Jaejoong is too pretty for his own good.

Thanks for reading! <33

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