Man Panties! [Standalone]

[xdropxaxheartx9]

Title: Man Panties!
Author: xdropxaxheartx9
Rating: NC-17!!
Pairing: Jon/Spencer
POV: Spencer’s.
Summary: Spencer secretly buys a "swimsuit" the day before he, Jon, Ryan, and Brendon go to a pool in the area.
Disclaimer: This never happened, that would be why it’s called fiction.
Author Notes: Inspired by Spencer’s girl-undies. At least, that's what they look

Comments

[almostrosie]

uh, the picture was amazing and now is my new computer backround :D
and guhhhh joncer is totally my otp. so this was awesome
hehe spencers ass. pale. lol.
this was just too good <3

[xdropxaxheartx9]

Awww ily. :3
Fankoo! :3

[justranda]

First things first. Achemed makes my life a little happier, oddly enough. ><

Secondly, Twilight ftw! \o/

Now, on to your fic. There is definitely room for improvement, because there's characterizations that don't fit and the sex isn't particularly well-written. However, I do see the potential for this, with just a bit of editing and tweaking.

♥

[xdropxaxheartx9]

Mine too. :333

Twilight<333

Thanks for the criticism. :3 I'll see what I can do to it, once I read my other smut to remember how to properly write sex. >> *hasn't read smut in ages*

[justranda]

Well, if you ever need a beta or just someone to look over things and offer some ideas and what have you, I'm always more than willing. :D

[xdropxaxheartx9]

I'll keep that in mind. :3

[miyavis_gazette]

Twilight? Yes plz.

Joncer pool sex? YES YES YES PLZ.

LOLOLOL. I loved this, I saw the title and I was like, okay, reading this right now.

MEM'D.

[xdropxaxheartx9]

YAY TWILIGHT FAN! :D
I want your MSN or Skype. :P

YAY. :D My title was eye-catching! *will need skillz for English class*

OMG MY STORY WAS MEM'D. *SPAZ*

[balloons]

Awesome story. I giggled the whole way through.

aaaaaaaaaand.
ME ME ME!
SPAZ WITH ME!

[xdropxaxheartx9]

OKIE I WILL. GIMME YOUR MSN OR SKYPE! :3

And fankoo. :3 <3

[starsandsands]

Nice. :D
Manpanties!
I lol'd.
(:

[xdropxaxheartx9]

Fankoo. :3