Comments | xelijahbabe07x: Her

xelijahbabe07x

Her

Feb 09, 2010 14:17

Title: Her
Disclaimer: I do not own nor do I claim to own FMA. However, this is MY fanfiction. If you would like to use this fanfiction for anything, please message me or comment to do so. Please put credit where credit is due. Thanks guys!
Rating: Um...M...just to be safe.
Warnings: Sex, language.
Pairing: EdXWinry (My FMA OTP!!! <3 )
Summary: Edward ( Read more... )

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Comments 2

xxlilmizcadyxx February 15 2010, 16:35:34 UTC

Loved it. Completely, and utterly, without a doubt LOVED IT.
Your use of language was truly lovely, and I like how it wasn't TOO sex orientated as you said, but was still intimate and showed how much they cared.
I liked the use of short sentences to intensify their meanings-- short sentences are always good, I find.
Seriously, awesome piece :)
~ C

xelijahbabe07x February 15 2010, 23:30:02 UTC

Thank you! Someone else with a shared fetish for short, yet powerful sentences. ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to tell you, I read your piece on FF.net that you submitted to the FMA section. The one about him saying that he missed her? Now that was great! I totally faved it. EdWin is one of my many coupling weak spots! <3 Thanks again sweetie.