I appreciate you coming back and leaving more details! I think that characterization is probably the most important thing about fanfic, so it's really rewarding to hear that you think they work here. I'm also glad you liked the porn! It's the most explicit slash I've ever written and I was kind of biting my nails over it.
I keep thinking about things that would happen in this 'verse after the end of the fic. IDK, I might have to write a timestamp or something. I occasionally like a little bit of established relationship fic. :-)
I'm SO glad you found them both IC. I had some trouble with Kurt at first, but I feel like I eventually found his voice, so I'm glad you agree!
Because too many times, I have seen stories where two male characters admit their feelings to each other and then proceed to have mind-blowingly perfect sex...even though they're both virgins who have NEVER done anything like that before.
*nods* I totally agree. Especially for someone like Finn who has never even considered what penetration with a man would actually require, I didn't want to go there. I didn't want it to be too perfect either, but since it was from Finn's POV, it kind of was because his world was so thoroughly rocked. ;-)
Thank you so much for reading and for all your kind words!
This is such an amazing story. I should have stopped and commented after each chapter, but I just swallowed the whole thing in one go because I COULDN'T STOP. I'm pretty sure I second everything that ladydreamer has said. And can i just tell you, I knew from the first three paragraphs that I would love this story? They were so beautiful and said so much. What a gorgeous way to fall in love. And like the other commenters have said, everyone was so in character, and that makes my heart sing, too.
I just want to give this kiss a thousand smooches, it made me so happy.
I should have stopped and commented after each chapter, but I just swallowed the whole thing in one go because I COULDN'T STOP.
I have read stories like that, and to think that you think that my fic is one of those?? My cheeks are all hot and glowy!
And thank you for saying that you love the first three paragraphs! I was not happy with them for the longest time but wasn't sure how to fix them until I had my mom read them and give me a swift kick in the pants! I'm glad that they finally came out right.
I love your fic and your everything in general, so I'm especially flattered at your praise. Thank you!!
Aw, thank for the love back! I can't even believe you remember who I am.
And I realize now I was so overwhelmed with emotion when I commented about smooching the kiss. I meant smooching the fic. Oh, well, smooching a Kinn kiss might be nice in a way, but I would probably feel like I was invading a private, heartfelt moment.
Also, so awesome that you showed this (or part of it) to your mom. My mom and I both write fanfic, but in two different fandoms, and we don't know each other's online identities or read each other's stuff, even though we are both familiar with each other's fandoms. She swears she doesn't write porn, so I suppose I could read her stuff without dying of embarrassment, but she hasn't offered it for my consumption. I can't imagine what she would make of my porn, lol!
Of course I remember who you are! I haven't been on lj much lately, otherwise you'd have my comments all up on your posts. ladydreamer rec'd me some meta of yours not long ago, but the discussion was long over so I didn't say anything. *shrug*
My mom helped me with the beginning while I was still writing, but I made her wait until after posting to read the whole thing. Her comment for part three was "SEX :D", haha. She only dabbles in Glee fandom, but she does read the occasional rec that I send her. We used to be in Supernatural fandom together, so we used to send incest porn recs to each other all the time, because that's how we roll. #tmi
That would be funny if you and your mom were flisties and didn't even know!
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I keep thinking about things that would happen in this 'verse after the end of the fic. IDK, I might have to write a timestamp or something. I occasionally like a little bit of established relationship fic. :-)
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I'm SO glad you found them both IC. I had some trouble with Kurt at first, but I feel like I eventually found his voice, so I'm glad you agree!
Because too many times, I have seen stories where two male characters admit their feelings to each other and then proceed to have mind-blowingly perfect sex...even though they're both virgins who have NEVER done anything like that before.
*nods* I totally agree. Especially for someone like Finn who has never even considered what penetration with a man would actually require, I didn't want to go there. I didn't want it to be too perfect either, but since it was from Finn's POV, it kind of was because his world was so thoroughly rocked. ;-)
Thank you so much for reading and for all your kind words!
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I just want to give this kiss a thousand smooches, it made me so happy.
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I have read stories like that, and to think that you think that my fic is one of those?? My cheeks are all hot and glowy!
And thank you for saying that you love the first three paragraphs! I was not happy with them for the longest time but wasn't sure how to fix them until I had my mom read them and give me a swift kick in the pants! I'm glad that they finally came out right.
I love your fic and your everything in general, so I'm especially flattered at your praise. Thank you!!
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And I realize now I was so overwhelmed with emotion when I commented about smooching the kiss. I meant smooching the fic. Oh, well, smooching a Kinn kiss might be nice in a way, but I would probably feel like I was invading a private, heartfelt moment.
Also, so awesome that you showed this (or part of it) to your mom. My mom and I both write fanfic, but in two different fandoms, and we don't know each other's online identities or read each other's stuff, even though we are both familiar with each other's fandoms. She swears she doesn't write porn, so I suppose I could read her stuff without dying of embarrassment, but she hasn't offered it for my consumption. I can't imagine what she would make of my porn, lol!
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My mom helped me with the beginning while I was still writing, but I made her wait until after posting to read the whole thing. Her comment for part three was "SEX :D", haha. She only dabbles in Glee fandom, but she does read the occasional rec that I send her. We used to be in Supernatural fandom together, so we used to send incest porn recs to each other all the time, because that's how we roll. #tmi
That would be funny if you and your mom were flisties and didn't even know!
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