Devil Ride 28/?

[xenalvr]

Title: Devil Ride

Comments

[bsofthewest]

Oh, cliff hanger.....I hate you so! (not you, the genre)

[xenalvr]

makes you want more though... and wanting is gooood... :)

[korenap]

Oh yeah, just plain evil to stop there. I think Mallet may find out about Olivia the hard way, as the object of her wrath.

[xenalvr]

mm, saving that for later :) x

[laniecroft]

I'm back to repeating myself ... your Olivia and Natalia are sooo cute and sweet together.

And you're back to ending at the worst moment :P This arm better doesn't belong to Mallet.

I can't wait for Natalia to get ride off Mallet and finally meet Emma.

The patented raised eyebrow look ... often imitated never duplicated

[xenalvr]

ha! does that mean I'm getting boring? repetitive?

dang, I had caffeine too late tonight

[laniecroft]

You're anything but boring. Nope boring doesn't come to my mind when I think about your stories, more something like wicked, twisted, cute, hot ... Not gonna feed ya ego more than that :P

The duplicated comment referred to the unique sexy way Olivia or CC lift one eyebrow, that is impossible to imitate.
Oh did I mention that IMO lifting of one eyebrow is one of the sexiest things ever.

[xenalvr]

oh, thanks! wasn't intentionally fishing *grin but thanks!

yeah, I get the brow comment, and actually... yes it is possible to imitate... 'cos Xena does it so darn well... *sigh

[ttandme69]

yay...an update...eagerly awaiting the next chapter...what is mallet up to??? you leave please post soon... you leave it there???? evil, wicked woman...lisa

[xenalvr]

hee...! yes, I've been told that I'm evil... I kinda like it! :)

[psychomonkey_29]

Noooooo! Cliffhanger.....so mean! But since you regularly update I will forgive you. ;)

Mallet is becoming a pain in the ass(if that was his arm)!

Please update as you are able(soon please?)

[xenalvr]

oh, good that I'm forgiven :)