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Devil Ride 31B/?

Dec 09, 2010 22:16

Title: Devil Ride ( Read more... )

Comments 10

bsofthewest December 9 2010, 16:38:27 UTC

I'm just going to die and fall apart if she calls her JellyBean!
I do love the humor and the ease they find in their conversation. Humor is so important in any good relationship. That and....
They are so perfect together. I just hope the world will allow them their happiness.

xenalvr December 10 2010, 04:16:24 UTC

thank you! I realise that a lot of people read Otalia fic with bias because of GL (hard not to!) but I know that when you say you think Otalia's perfect together, you mean the Otalia of MY writing. That makes all the difference for me :)

bsofthewest December 10 2010, 04:21:09 UTC

Yes, I do mean your writing. I think the GL Natalia is not nearly as good as yours. Your Olivia is also an improvement in that she is more flexible and seems to be better drawn.

laniecroft December 9 2010, 16:53:59 UTC

I should have known better than thinking that this is the chapter where Natalia finally meets Emma, of course you had to fit in another chapter, not that I'm complaining a bit.
A nice relaxed time together how great and rare is that. Like how the play this when, then, maybe, if ... only to end up together again.
I have another interesting if: Imagine Olivia tries to steal Natalias husband, then she gets fatal sick and only survives because donors an organ of her dying husband ... :P

xenalvr December 10 2010, 04:15:12 UTC

of course. Xenalvr never delivers the expected *smirk

Ha! I thought about writing it that way (canon-plot) but man, no normal person would think up that kinda plot.. HAHA!

hoping2 December 9 2010, 17:00:53 UTC

Love, love, love the ease of their conversation. The playful way they tease each other. Natalia's thoughts are like so many of us.......at times wondering if things had happened differently how would our life be now? I ponder these things......Ok sorry for such deep thinking. Fab writing as always!!!

xenalvr December 10 2010, 04:13:55 UTC

LOL no don't be sorry, it's how I roll too, evidently *grin*

Thank you! I really have so much fun writing their conversations.

psychomonkey_29 December 10 2010, 03:40:22 UTC

Yay, indeed! Great update and looking forward for the meet and greet!

(you made Natalia like Olivia was in the show-how usually nothing good lasts before it is taking away...it works for this fic.)

xenalvr December 10 2010, 04:12:52 UTC

arghhhh nice user icon! Pepsi FTW!

psychomonkey_29 December 11 2010, 04:25:15 UTC

Yes, it's one of the best if not the BEST icon I have found of Pepa. She looks bad ass! (and yummy!)

I saw this batch of icons @ passion_perfect and wanted to know more about it so I went on YouTube and found all the episodes that I could get-got hooked!