Devil Ride 33/?

Dec 12, 2010 09:53

Title: Devil Ride ( Read more... )

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ttandme69 December 12 2010, 02:59:29 UTC
well, what a great day for them until they arrived back @ company and I am guessing that Mallet was outside of Natalia's room waiting for her...what an ass! He is being the Franktard of this story!!!

Just caught up w/the last 4 chapters...yay...loved them. please post more soon. thanks, Lisa

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xenalvr December 13 2010, 04:59:16 UTC
heh! I think Mallet's of a different class from Frank, actually.

Will update some time today! :) xx

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hoping2 December 12 2010, 05:05:44 UTC
~It touched her more than expensive gifts and fancy dinners ever could.

Isn't that so true.....someones time and thoughtfulness are worth so much more than what money can buy.
Great writing.......and yes I look forward to your writing after a long day at work. A great way to get my mind off of things I see at work. :) Keep writing!!!

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xenalvr December 13 2010, 05:01:19 UTC
hey, thanks for the follow on twitter! (that *is you, right? :P)

thanks for taking the time to comment frequently, I appreciate it! And I'm glad my fic can take your mind off things you see at work! my ex likes to tell me 'bout all the crazy stuff that happens in A&E ;p you can share too, if you like! heh. I love a peek into people's lives.

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hoping2 December 13 2010, 05:41:58 UTC
Lol. Yes that is me on twitter. :)

I love my job in the ER! And yes at times I see some very crazy stuff....love it! But there are hard nights too and that is when I enjoy your writing the most.....truly does help to get my mind on other things! *wink

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laniecroft December 12 2010, 06:54:06 UTC
I said it already, but stuff like that It touched her more than expensive gifts and fancy dinners ever could. is wonderful. I really like how you fit in observations from both Olivia and Natalia they are perfect for the moment and feel so natural.
As for Mallet, hurry up Olivia find something to use against him, he's annoying as hell.

[... ]to feel like a spectacular pain in her behind. Hehe, Emma is around and it's *behind* and not a** :D

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xenalvr December 13 2010, 05:02:19 UTC
LOL yes, 'behind' rather than 'ass' when Emma's around; I didn't even think much of it! Damn, there must be a Natalia bot in my head, minding my language around children... *laughs

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laniecroft December 13 2010, 22:47:38 UTC
LOL virtual around children around and you write PG ... as much as I like your Emma if she turns you into a PG-writer ... I say "Emma get lost" I want the smut, naughty writer back :P

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psychomonkey_29 December 12 2010, 17:36:45 UTC
Yay! Sleepover indeed!

Great that Emma and Natalia seem to hit it off and Olivia is really in love if the everyday things Natalia does are sexy and make her fall even harder!

Please update soon!

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xenalvr December 13 2010, 05:03:19 UTC
*smiles It's always about the everyday things, isn't it? I mean, if someone can take your breath away doing the most mundane things, you know you're a goner... :p

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