Romantic indeed! :-) Loved this chapter.....sweet, tender, romantic moments. Just what I needed tonight!
~ She hadn't known many perfect moments in her life, but this--having Natalia look at her with the same intensity that she felt in her chest, and returning her kisses with the same ardour--this had to be one of them.~
Love this......it is what we all want I believe.....to connect with someone so completely.
A/n if you couldn't tell feeling a little melancholy Thanks for the update! Much enjoyed :)
If that's the outcome ... feel free to feel romantic all the time :D It's a really romantic, relaxed chapter. Marinas crying screams Mallet all over. It's about time someone stops him.
"[...] soft, warm and beautiful, kind of like the swirly folds of drizzled melted chocolate." Wonderful, you always come up with such great metaphor, I really, really like them.
The last part about the perfect moment, you captured the moment perfectly.
btw I'm curious about the results of Olivia and Emma's shopping spree. Anything left for other costumers :P
If stopping Mallet means the end I'm all for NOT stopping Mallet :P
You're welcome, glad I could help refresh your memory. My curious side just wants to know what they shopped and maybe they found something for Natalia as well :P
OK, this just was lovely: "Olivia let Natalia's voice wash over her, enjoying its dulcet tone. She liked the way Natalia looked and sounded when she talked--soft, warm and beautiful, kind of like the swirly folds of drizzled melted chocolate." and not just for the chocolate reference. That you used the expression "dulcet tone" just killed me. The entire scene killed me with it's sweetness. Malet needs to be put down. Now he's hurting Marina. They are going to be angry with Natalia if this isn't dealt with FAST.
I actually really dislike Marina from the teeeeny bit I've seen of her in GL, so it doesn't hurt me to hurt her *grin* I'll try to make sure it doesn't go further than that!
oh the sweetness... I like writing sweet sometimes... *dreamy sigh*
evil...evil...evil woman! you leave the chapter off there....I think this would be called cruel and unusual punishment to your readers! it is wonderful to see how comfortable they are with each other! I am wondering if Mallet broke up w/Marina under the delusion that he and Natalia have something going on!?!?!? thanks for the chapter and eagerly awaiting your next posting! Lisa
well, I will withhold the punishment until I read the next chapter! LOL... eagerly awaiting the next chapter...thanks and enjoy the rest of your weekend, Lisa
Awh, very romantic. May our comments keep you in a mood for romance and smut. I'm waiting for the sorry I did this this to them, but I was in a really bad mood. I'm sure that entry would brighten my day regardless.
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~ She hadn't known many perfect moments in her life, but this--having Natalia look at her with the same intensity that she felt in her chest, and returning her kisses with the same ardour--this had to be one of them.~
Love this......it is what we all want I believe.....to connect with someone so completely.
A/n if you couldn't tell feeling a little melancholy
Thanks for the update! Much enjoyed :)
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It's a really romantic, relaxed chapter.
Marinas crying screams Mallet all over. It's about time someone stops him.
"[...] soft, warm and beautiful, kind of like the swirly folds of drizzled melted chocolate." Wonderful, you always come up with such great metaphor, I really, really like them.
The last part about the perfect moment, you captured the moment perfectly.
btw I'm curious about the results of Olivia and Emma's shopping spree. Anything left for other costumers :P
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thank you, thank you :) glad you enjoy my romantic side :D okay, now dispel the thought, 'cos the moment's over *grin
oh yeah, thanks for reminding me of the spree. HA!
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You're welcome, glad I could help refresh your memory. My curious side just wants to know what they shopped and maybe they found something for Natalia as well :P
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"Olivia let Natalia's voice wash over her, enjoying its dulcet tone. She liked the way Natalia looked and sounded when she talked--soft, warm and beautiful, kind of like the swirly folds of drizzled melted chocolate."
and not just for the chocolate reference. That you used the expression "dulcet tone" just killed me. The entire scene killed me with it's sweetness.
Malet needs to be put down. Now he's hurting Marina. They are going to be angry with Natalia if this isn't dealt with FAST.
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oh the sweetness... I like writing sweet sometimes... *dreamy sigh*
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I play nice... sometimes. :p the next chapter'll more than make up for it x
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and welcome back :) you've been missed.
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