I was going to leave you coal for saying we're going to have to wait a bit for the next part but.... good things are usually worth waiting for... so your lucky your good. Haha!
I'm loving this story! Merry late ( I spent more money than I should, got bothered by my family, can't find the exscape door, what the hell is on plate, why isn't there eyecandy at these things) christmas!
Personally will do... *thinks* with a santa hat! *nods* if I think of any thing else to that list I'll let you know *evil laugh*
As for getting out of this... Hell hole... *sighs* I don't get out out for another 4 days then its pills so they can make sure nothing falls off. Haha. I need to keep all my bits! But I'm trying to stay up beat about it
Gus has to be loyal to Harley. I think that comes through well in this chapter.He seems thoughtful, I like that.....he needs to be sort like Solomon and divide up the baby. Hard line to walk. I like that he hasn't told Harley about Natalia's past. that shows he respects her privacy. I expect all that will hit the fan when the Mallet's shitstorm happens. Then again the entire town will have a cow when Olivia and Natalia go open. I never saw Gus/Nicky on the show. That makes no difference to your story, so as long as he respects our ladies, fine with me.
Then again the entire town will have a cow when Olivia and Natalia go open. hee, that was funny! I didn't actually think about that much! that would be a funny scene to write, maybe? :)
I don't blame Gus for wanting to be careful and taking things slow for Rafe's sake. Harley would get a bit of a pass from me if it was concern for Rafe that was her issue. So don't get that feeling though, which leaves me wanting to tell her to grow the fuck up. heh
it's interesting for me to see the different ways people read this chapter. Most agree that Gus has got a point, which is great, because he does. Some feel that he hasn't bothered to come up with any solutions for what he's worried about and sadly agree that it is how RL is. I just hope I balanced everything right. :)
You write so well, and even as an au your characters still remain true to their core selves. Personally Harley needs to grow up if you are insecure there obviously is some form of discontent there. And as for mallet , Olivia owns a gun right, and shes a tough cookie, so is Natalia for that matter..
Thank you! That is absolutely what I crave to hear! :p It's nice to know that I'm still writing them true to their core selves this far into the fic. And I love hearing what you guys think about the behaviour of the different character; it helps with the progression of the story :)
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I'm loving this story! Merry late ( I spent more money than I should, got bothered by my family, can't find the exscape door, what the hell is on plate, why isn't there eyecandy at these things) christmas!
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and hey, I happen to like coal. do I give you my address so you can mail it to me, or do you want to visit me personally? HAA!
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As for getting out of this... Hell hole... *sighs* I don't get out out for another 4 days then its pills so they can make sure nothing falls off. Haha. I need to keep all my bits! But I'm trying to stay up beat about it
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hee, you always worry :p
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I never saw Gus/Nicky on the show. That makes no difference to your story, so as long as he respects our ladies, fine with me.
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hee, that was funny! I didn't actually think about that much! that would be a funny scene to write, maybe? :)
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