Devil Ride 38/?

[xenalvr]

Title: Devil Ride

Comments

[laniecroft]

When I first learned that Olivia was home already I was a little bit disappointed because I was looking forward to some Natalia/Emma time, but my disappointed lasted until Natalia turned to Olivia, what a welcome home ... hot, very hot!
Could Emma's timing suck more, hehe :P

And you're insecure about writing Emma, no need to be! You write Emma just fine and Olivia's interaction with her Jellybean is really fun to read. Love the little grammar correcting, so cute!
All those little things/details in your story are awesome, like Olivia sitting down taking Natalias hand while Emma is around.

[xenalvr]

yay thanks! happy you enjoyed the update.

[bsofthewest]

Who's the real tease here?

[xenalvr]

urmmmmmm... Emma? HA!

[xenalvr]

dank! I'm asian, I like a bit of everything.

[choticraven]

what a great thing to for my day of freedom! Thank you! * hugs * Is this calm before the storm though?

[xenalvr]

you're welcome! and cheers to getting out! heh. and in reply to your question... yes.

[choticraven]

do you have to be so.... simple. In the answers? :P

[xenalvr]

ha! why? do you like a complicated woman? I'm not the one for you then. :D

[hoping2]

Holy mother of everything good!!! You sure know how to throw an ice cold cup of water on someone!!! 'smirks. Awesome writing as always! By the sounds of it you worry about how you write Emma....I think you hit her spot on:) Love the interaction between her, Olivia, and Natalia.....although maybe not so much right now.....damn ice water! 'wink

[xenalvr]

ha, well... I've been known to be a player. I mean tease. Tease, that's it! Ha!