Devil Ride 42/?

Jan 04, 2011 11:54

Title: Devil Ride ( Read more... )

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tanama30 January 4 2011, 03:12:47 UTC
i am glad that harley believes natalia and is willing to help her. update soon i love this story

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psychomonkey_29 January 4 2011, 04:28:40 UTC
Whoa! Who would of thought Harley would be an friend-other than you of course!

The story is taking a surprising turn, maybe Natalia and Olivia will have a happily ever after sooner!

Please update soon!

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bsofthewest January 4 2011, 05:24:08 UTC
What an f'ing great meet up!

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laniecroft January 4 2011, 08:01:10 UTC
wow, awesome twist. Never would have thought of Harley. Wonderful that Harley came around and allows Natalia time with Rafe :D
Great that Natalia is so honest and open about her ex-job and Olivia and hopefully Harley stays as true as she seems to be.
Sine it was such an unexpected twist, i didn't even missed Otalia in this chapter :P

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choticraven January 4 2011, 14:57:06 UTC
Great chapter as always.. I'm still not to sure of Harley... Then again I've never been a fan of hers, so there just might not be any hope for her character. haha!

I do like the fact that you showed that Mallet has been acting odd around the office, and that Harley did take her seriously. Then there's the fact that she didn't cut Natalia off from Rafe.. Though she just should have gone up to Natalia in the first place.. I mean Olivia has no problem with doing that stuff, I would think at the very least Harley wouldn't.

Hey, does this mean that Mallet might have seen Harley with Natalia and is he going to get freaky about that too? I'm actually surprised he hasn't tried to talk to her personally again.

As to your previous question of what do you did.... * tilts my head * what do you want exactly? * raises my eyebrow * there will be no dancing!... until better. haha

And I'm not greedy! *pouts * I just know what I like and want more of it.. * grins * not my fault you write so well.

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