Devil Ride 44/57

[xenalvr]

Title: Devil Ride

Comments

[hoping2]

One word..................HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

[xenalvr]

one word: thanks! :)

[laniecroft]

one ice cold shower later ... geeez ... hot, extremely hot ... good thing I'm not working today, definitely not a read-while-at-work chapter :P ... way too hot for work
I definitely have to rethink my I don't like bath tubs I like showers policy :P

btw there's a huge typo in this chapter I'm pretty sure it's 44/75 not 44/57 chapters :P

[xenalvr]

hee! when I started reading that typo sentence, I felt a little frantic, then I saw what you meant and... ha! don't be sad. it has to end some time.

[laniecroft]

I know that all good things have to end one day, but it's way to early for this awesome story to end ... I'm pretty sure this story needs more than 13 chapters until the end. And 13 chapter certain doesn't include the epilogue :P

[xenalvr]

heh! by your definition, there'll never be a good time for Devil Ride to end *grin* alas, my friend, I have real life to contend with. Writing doesn't feed me, not yet.

[bsofthewest]

44/75 not 44/57 ...yah, I saw that typo...fix it or we will pitch a royal bitch.
I'm useless right now.
I'll come back later.

[xenalvr]

ha! mm nope, that ain't no typo! I'll wait for ya to come back! ;p

[choticraven]

And why does Olivia go to work again? just let Greg run the place and stay in bed with Natalia.

[xenalvr]

hee! they'd get sick of each other that way ;p

[choticraven]

OK, fine... small breaks away from each other... Only so Olivia can check things

[xenalvr]

that sounds scarily sticky and needy. hee! I'm not like that so my characters won't be like that.