Devil Ride 47/57

Jan 12, 2011 19:14

Title: Devil Ride ( Read more... )

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bsofthewest January 12 2011, 12:20:14 UTC
I wrote a long and detailed comment, and then in my delirium from reading this perfect chapter it got erased. Oh well, what can I do but repeat myself. Food fight, wonderful. Hot mirror sex, wonderful. Doris, wonderful, and now we have a mystery? Who the fuck is TC? I don't want this fic to ever end.
PS: and I learned a new word

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tanama31 January 12 2011, 22:30:16 UTC
great update loved the food fight as well Doris making her presence known. now who is TC? this is getting too crazy with all these characters appearing in natalia's life. update soon plz

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xenalvr January 13 2011, 03:41:22 UTC
um, TC is Tony Cameletti AKA Mallet? :p

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tanama31 January 13 2011, 23:27:47 UTC
oh man i totally missed that my bad

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bsofthewest January 16 2011, 18:27:34 UTC
I was 99% sure about that, but when I went back to the other chapters to do research on the name, I got distracted by the great writing that I forgot what I was doing and re-read the fraking thing all over again. Not a bad thing, I must say.

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psychomonkey_29 January 13 2011, 01:45:22 UTC
Hot sex, food fight and a word lesson all in one chapter, what more could you ask for! (more please!) Like the little mysteries also-got my brain working after all the sexy stuff!

Please update soon!

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laniecroft January 13 2011, 05:58:12 UTC
Talk about a mood breaker. And how the fuck did Mallet get into Olivias suite. I bet that annoys Olivia even more than breaking the sex mood. Not a good time to be one of her employees, this is an absolute no go that some could enter the suite.
The part before Mallet's phone was awesome, hot mirror sex ... uh yeah, niiice Natalia!
Emma is really cute, love that she put the bread in her mouth :D
And that's for teaching me a new word

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anonymous January 13 2011, 23:39:27 UTC
hi i bring u greetings from the caribbean, thank you for a beautiful story enjoying every chapter. i would like chapter 47 b 47 c i would not be rob of any chapters 57 is just not enough.

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xenalvr January 14 2011, 03:46:52 UTC
LOL chapter 47 *has been broken into three parts, if you've noticed! *smirks* :) Hee! Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you're enjoying the story! xx

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