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Devil Ride 48/57

Jan 16, 2011 19:31

Title: Devil Ride ( Read more... )

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psychomonkey_29 January 16 2011, 18:00:35 UTC

Mallet needs to watch out, Olivia gunning for him is not going to be pretty! :) Also it is weird that Natalia and Olivia have stalker ex's to thank for them meeting and being together, good things do happen because of bad misfortune.

Love this chapter and can't wait for more, thanks for writing.

xenalvr January 18 2011, 10:02:59 UTC

yay, thanks for reading and faithfully commenting! :D and yeah, I was just thinking about how they met and got together in this fic and *shrugs* it was really through the meddling of these men! :p always a silver lining!

choticraven January 16 2011, 18:18:18 UTC

Oh wow, I'm surprised Olivia didn't take anyone's head when it came to all that. I was figuring that at least one or two people wouldn't have a job.

The vulnerable yet stable connection you showed in this chapter was really great. After everything that had happen to them during their day it was good to have them be close. I'm just hoping Natalia doesn't have her breaking point.

xenalvr January 18 2011, 10:03:45 UTC

heh yeah well I'm too kind, I think. maybe I should have made her chew someone's head off... but I'm looking for a job myself and... yeah, I think I'm too soft. SIGh. fake cat, now this... :p

bsofthewest January 16 2011, 18:44:16 UTC

She's a tough but good boss. She's a tough but loving mother. She's a goddamn perfect lover....the woman is a goddess!

xenalvr January 18 2011, 10:03:57 UTC

she sure as hell is!

ttandme69 January 18 2011, 11:14:53 UTC

I could not have said it better if I tried for many years! Lisa

ttandme69 January 17 2011, 04:07:50 UTC

Liv is gonna hurt Mallet! He had better watch out! Love this one and eagerly awaiting the next chapter...thanks, Lisa

xenalvr January 18 2011, 10:04:16 UTC

heh yeh thanks lisa! :D hope all's good in your part of the world!

ttandme69 January 18 2011, 11:13:56 UTC

hey...u r up awfully early! LOL... Ice ad sleet all over the place in Virginia and DC! 2 hour work delay...so, I get to read this a.m. before work! Yay! Wish it was 2 feet of snow so I would not have to go to work for at least a week...that would be a great post Christmas present! Take it easy...Lisa

xenalvr January 19 2011, 02:33:05 UTC

nope, not early. I'm in australia, remember? :D

laniecroft January 17 2011, 04:48:40 UTC

All employees still alive and Olivia still pissed of ... okay not at the moment she's occupied with more pleasurable things :P ...but tomorrow morning will come and hopefully Olivia will find a way to get rid of Mallet. I know it means end of story (not if I had something to say :P) but this guy is annoying as hell.
Hehe, Olivias reflection why and because of whom she and Natalia met. LOL, can't say wacko exes are all bad :P
I wonder if Natalia will get over this feeling guilty for Mallets actions. On the hand why would she Olivias way to "help" her deal is to freakin' hot. :P

xenalvr January 18 2011, 10:04:42 UTC

nah, he's not annoying, he's just obsessed and a little bit scary. :p

laniecroft January 18 2011, 13:26:38 UTC

Oh okay, he's just obsessed ... makes it so much better :P
I stand by annoying in combination with weird and sick :P
Can't wait for Olivias reaction.