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For Those Who Wait: a Mass Effect fanfic 1/4

Jul 02, 2012 10:09

Title: For Those Who Wait, 1/4
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: F!Shepard/Kaidan Alenko
Spoilers (if any): Mass Effect 3
Summary: An expanded version of what happens after that dinner date on the Presidium.
A/N: A fill for several prompts on the Mass Effect Kink Meme, so it contains explicit sex, light bondage, spanking, biotic play. This is obviously too ( Read more... )

Comments 7

lossefalme July 2 2012, 15:35:16 UTC

GREAT! I really enjoyed their game at the beginning and the thoughts going through Kaidan's head afterward regarding the undressing and the showering. Lol. Also love the fact you brought up how nervous he was about their date and how thinking of her security was so much easier for him than thinking of the date. So adorable, and also realistic. I mean, they are both still getting over what happened between them in ME2, and they had a rough start in the beginning of ME3 too. I like seeing them come back together this way. I also really like how even though this is an NC17 fic, you've actually got PLOT. ;) You don't just jump right into the explicit content, but give us some warm up and characterization beforehand. Love it!! Well done, and I look forward to more ( ... )

xenzen July 2 2012, 15:39:14 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed. :) I can't seem to write smut without plot, anymore, and the length of my fics reflect that, LOL. Hopefully I got the voices of the rest of the crew right.

I've registered on AO3, but I won't get an account until next year, so... yeah, that's gonna be a bit of a wait. They also seem to have fixed their traffic issues, so that's good, too.

lossefalme July 2 2012, 23:35:46 UTC

It's hard for me to do PWP as well. For some reason I just feel better throwing in at least some iota of a plot, lol. Maybe then the smut feels justified somehow? Haha. Oh well, makes it more fun, I think. And more rewarding when you get to the juicy parts!

Oh dear! That is a long wait! :S Well... I will be watching for updates here and on the comm!

xenzen July 2 2012, 23:39:52 UTC

Part of it, I think, is that it's also more of a challenge, to write smut without making it smut, if that makes any sense? You can write something sensual and sexy, without resorting to the vulgar, or being too explicit with Tab A going into Slot B. I think everyone knows how the physical act goes, but the interesting bit is what is going on in the minds of the people involved. That might be why I only wrote a smut fic after writing three general, or at least PG-13, stories.

glaswegian_took July 2 2012, 15:43:43 UTC

Ooooh I like this a lot! Can't wait for part 2! :3

xenzen July 2 2012, 15:45:03 UTC

It's finished, actually, all four chapters are up on my LJ.

glaswegian_took July 2 2012, 15:47:25 UTC

AWWWWW YISSSSSS! *runs away*