Pain To Stop Pain (gen)

Oct 11, 2011 07:59

Title: Pain To Stop Pain
Author: xephwrites
Characters: Sam, Dean, Lucifer
Rating: R to be safe
Word Count: 1391
Disclaimer: I do not own Supernatural, or any of its characters. Just playing with toys that are not mine. I promise to return them (mostly) undamaged!
Spoilers: Up to 7.03
Summary: Lucifer taunts him constantly, forcing Sam to deal with it.
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omg i wrote gen, h/c, dean, sam

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quiche1206 October 11 2011, 12:31:54 UTC

Oh, I definitely like it! Good job!

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xephwrites October 11 2011, 13:00:03 UTC
Thank you so much!!

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anonymous October 11 2011, 12:55:59 UTC
Nice. =) I loved Lucifer goofing around with the stuff in the bathroom, nice touch. And Dean was awesome here, taking responsibility for Sammy's therapy-pain.

Teensy little concrit note, you're jumping between past and present tense a lot. Just so you know. =) Loved it though.

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xephwrites October 11 2011, 12:59:52 UTC
thank you for commenting!!

Yes, I realized after posting that it was jumping. that's what I get for not getting a beta!!

And I did have too much fun writing Lucifer!

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vail_kagami October 11 2011, 13:36:50 UTC
That's exactly the kind of fucked-up solution those boys would think of.
Great story!

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xephwrites October 12 2011, 01:49:58 UTC
Thank you!! I wanted to write something that just, you know, made sense for them in their bizarre relationship.

Glad you liked it and thank you for commenting!!! ♥

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elsewhere91 October 11 2011, 19:06:39 UTC
This is so painful but so amazing at the same time. I loved the snide remarks from Lucifer, and i loved Dean being supportive and there for Sam. Poor Sam *hugs Sam*. Great story.

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xephwrites October 12 2011, 01:50:42 UTC
Thank you so much!!

Yes, I had a bit too much fun thinking of Lucifer's lines. :D

Glad you enjoyed it!

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dont_hate_me01 October 11 2011, 19:59:36 UTC
Lucifer opened one of the shower caps and put it on. "Is it me?" He asked as he gave a supermodel type pose. - This made me laugh so much!!!

Loved it, thanks for sharing!

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xephwrites October 12 2011, 01:51:37 UTC
So glad you enjoyed it!!

And I could so see Mark Pellegrino doing something like that on the show! He is made of so much awesome!

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