Ah, I should be in bed but I've been dying to read this ever since Ariel turned in her art.
I desperately want to know who had Ed and what they were looking to learn from him. As it took weeks to find him and they've clearly broken several laws with steep penatlies, whatever group this is is well organized and means business - and whatever it is they're planning may well prove serious to all of Amestris. I will have to wait to read the rest, but you've got my interest, definitely.
Don't worry, I'm planning to continue this story in at least three more parts. You'll find out exactly what's going on, and yes, it's pretty serious. No spoilers! Thanks for reading, glad you liked!
Ah... this is so good. Lots of people write angst, but it takes talent to take it just up to the edge and not go overboard. You have the touch, my friend, you have the touch.
*sigh* I told myself not to read this. I told myself that because this was a guaranteed angst fest that I should wait to read this when it was done. *sighs again* One of these day I really am gonna listen to myself. I fought the good fight but curiosity won out. You killed me with the eye thing you know. *in a wailing tone of voice* Not the eye! Not his beautiful eye! Nooooooo!! *sobs* Roy! Why weren't you there five minutes sooner?! *more sobbing* Interrogate. Well that's a nice word for it. I hope Roy fries the sonofabitch starting with HIS eyes! rawr! *quickly runs out of false bravado* *sigh* Now to make a choice - to read or not to read. Find out what happens next now or later. *eyeballs the link to chapter 2* Damn you curiosity! :)
Well I'm glad you chose to read anyway. I appreciate everyone who reads, and even more so those who leave feedback. I know you're probably not happy with me for what I've done to Ed, but I can assure you I only do it out of love!
I pretty much got sucked in this chapter, I don't know if you are familiar with the SAW movies but I felt like really like watching a crossover between SAw and silent hill2 XD (and its a good thing XD) and now moving on to chapter 2! XD)
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I desperately want to know who had Ed and what they were looking to learn from him. As it took weeks to find him and they've clearly broken several laws with steep penatlies, whatever group this is is well organized and means business - and whatever it is they're planning may well prove serious to all of Amestris. I will have to wait to read the rest, but you've got my interest, definitely.
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Ah... this is so good. Lots of people write angst, but it takes talent to take it just up to the edge and not go overboard. You have the touch, my friend, you have the touch.
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Thanks for reading!
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