To go in the epilouge of later dates...

[xfaiths_havenx]

Write, right?

Burned

The night went so well
That is, until we walked back
(when truth burned like coals.)

Music

I played your body
Like the most skilled musician
All to show my love

V*

V stood back and sneared,
"I bring not sweet fortunes, just
a silent walk back."

* Roman numeral 5.

Plans

Making a future
Never seemed as sweet as when
You meant "I love

Comments

[bombyamom]

Haiku can be very enlightening and theraputic...it's good to see another person feeling it!! (I've got some on my blog, including a new one today!)

[bombyamom]

When I've got more time, I'll give some more detailed comments...

[xfaiths_havenx]

I got the idea from your journal and one other blogger that writes ONLY in haikus. I was glancin' over my friends list and saw some of yours. It's inspiring man.. :)

"Booty Booty Booty
Booty Booty Booty Booty
Booty Booty YEAH BOYEE!!!!!"

'cept for that one. that was just funny!