poem for english.....

[xfallinagain20x]

We had to write a free verse poem for english this time and here it is.. tell me what you think about it in my comments.. ((this is one of the harder ones that we had to write, or so I thought..)) ((( this is like the 6th one we did or something)))

Before it All Gets Worse

I've tried, tried, and tried again,
But its just not getting through your

Comments

i heart it

[anonymous]

hey neesha.. i just wanted to comment n say that i love that poem it is soo cute..okay well i am out.. heart always-
kylee

Re: i heart it

[xfallinagain20x]

Thanks kylee!! it took me awhile to think about to write it and i had sooo many scribbles on it because i kept changing it haha..

[the___joy]

was that about me?

it was really good though

noppers

[xfallinagain20x]

no, that wasnt about you.. i was just thinking about somethings after talking to my cousin and that is just something i was thinking about so i was in the mood to write like that.