invented form.

[xgoodytwoshoesx]

i had to invent a fixed form of poetry and write a poem. the rules for my invented form were nine lines, with the
syllable count: 9 7 5 3 1 3 5 7 9. the syllable that begins the poem must also and the poem, and be the poem's
middle syllable. i chose this because it's easy to crown. i wrote two of them, one crowned the other not.

Belladonna

Comments

[duchessdandy]

They are lovely - the pattern has a nice rise/fall effect

[xgoodytwoshoesx]

why thank you. do i know you?
where did you find me?
lets be friends, i checked out
your journal.

[duchessdandy]

thank you. I can't remember, it was a few days ago

(so i suppose i don't know you)