New Fic: Still Here: G/R RPS: NC-17

Jan 18, 2006 18:06

Jesus, time flies :| When I went to find the link for the last RPS I wrote, I realized it was pretty much a *year* ago that I last wrote one. So I suppose this one was due :P ( Read more... )

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sandstorm63 January 19 2006, 02:46:23 UTC
Never mind my rambling in my previous comment, lol. ETHAN!!!!!! This was so, SO good. This is exactly what I picture would happen if *cough* they had anything going. You are so totally intuned it's amazing. Thank you my friend for this little gem. *hugs*

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xhaleslowly January 19 2006, 02:59:43 UTC
Hey Andz... so sorry about that (re. your other comment) - it was completely my fault :| I started having second thoughts about this fic and pulled it for a couple minutes then re-posted after changing a couple minor things. Honestly, I'm still unsure about it, but I had to just let it go.

Anyway THANK YOU for letting me know you liked it! Getting your comment makes me feel tons better :X

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onewayfreak January 19 2006, 02:54:07 UTC
ETHAN. You probably didn't notice but I've been MIA for a while. I'm SO sorry I didn't reply to your last two (I think it's two?) entries. Buuut I'm back now and I squealed when I saw this on my friends page.

This is the best RPS I've read in a long time (possibly ever). Largely because of this paragraph:

I look at him, his eyes closed, cheek resting on his fingers beneath his head. His hair is a little skewed around his face and he looks so not perfect and I love that. There's a dark tinge of circle beneath his eye, the start of tiny wrinkles around his mouth, and an actual, bona fide nose hair curling out of his nostril. It makes me smile just to look at him, to stare at him like this, knowing he's lying there for me. I keep pushing my hand up and down his spine, pressing harder, feeling each ridge beneath my fingers.

*loves you forever* I have no idea how many times I read that. Love it love it love it. This is RPS at it's very finest.

"You don't have to do that," his voice is quiet and the southern drawl slips out.This made me ( ... )

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xhaleslowly January 19 2006, 04:17:02 UTC
Hey sweetie... yeah, I did notice that you weren't around, but I'm glad you're back now :X Hope it was all good things that kept you away :)

As usual, you leave me speechless and blushing :P I love what you say about my fics, and this... geez. You always know how to make me feel awesome and everything. I love that you loved that part - I want my RPS to feel real, and that was what just, well, felt real somehow.

Thanks for all this, Em... you've made me feel much better about a fic that I felt like was just too close to my own heart to make sense to anyone else.

*hugs*

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fansee January 19 2006, 02:59:34 UTC
Wonderful. Tnank you, thank you, thank you. I am so happy that you picked up this thread again. It is majorly touching, sad and hot and true, all at once.

My apologies for not communicating in so long. I have a number of lame excuses, but I won't bore you with them. I loved "Members Only" and I look forward to lots more Ethanfic. FanSee aka njs

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xhaleslowly January 19 2006, 04:20:27 UTC
Thanks for this :) I honestly hadn't ever intended to continue that fic, but dammit if I didn't get this idea and run with it :P Not promising a Chapter 4 at this point, but who knows where the ideas will come from.

And it's good to hear from you again... with all the people that have been fading away from fandom these days, it's definitely nice to have some come back :)

More fics on the way soon!

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fansee January 19 2006, 04:37:40 UTC
I never actually faded...rather I got too involved with fanfic, of all things. (What a surprise - not!)However, there's nothing better - nothing - than an Ethanfic. Rereading helped, but new is better. FanSee

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xhaleslowly January 21 2006, 20:17:20 UTC
I never actually faded...rather I got too involved with fanfic, of all things.

Well that's a good enough reason! lol! I'm always glad to hear that people are still interested in the fan fic - makes me feel good to know I'm not the only one still hangin' on ;)

And thanks again for the nice words... always appreciated :)

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little_lusty January 19 2006, 03:11:06 UTC
Have I ever told you how much I really love you?
Babe this was amazing! OMFG it was so good!!!!
I think I might not have enough words to say how much I enjoyed this!
Wait I go it....You are brilliant and I now need a VERY cold shower!
How did you know Justin topping just makes everyone happy? *smirks* Hugds, Brit

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xhaleslowly January 19 2006, 04:22:13 UTC
Hey Brit... well, I had to let Randy "make good" on his promise to Gale from Chapter 2 :P

Thanks for this, sweetie... your comments are always appreciated!

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little_lusty January 19 2006, 04:28:51 UTC
Yes, yes you did and I am so very happy for it!
*worries that she may like toppy Justin too much! Is that even possible? LOL*
And you know I am always happy to comment when you write one of your fantastic fics! You know I would fill up your blog with praise if I could! But I have to share and let others comment on your work!:)

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vlredreign January 19 2006, 03:14:33 UTC
I think it was the line about the single nose hair...such an odd thing, but it just made everything all the more real. The small things about people that we know and love that seem so inconsequential. The hesitation and the fear of screwing up a good thing before it even starts...haven't we all felt that at one point? And the sex itself; real, sloppy, messy...like sex is. Just awesome, Ethan. Home run!

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xhaleslowly January 19 2006, 04:24:52 UTC
Yeah, that nose hair. You know, it was one of those lines that crept in there and somehow seemed to work, I guess :) The thing with RPS is that I think it should feel more *real* than other fics, and so I try to throw in those realistic details like errant nose hairs :P

Thanks for letting me know it worked - and that you liked the fic. I was a little unsure about this one, but it's awesome to get this feedback :)

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