New Fic: No Words to Say: G/R RPS: NC-17

[xhaleslowly]

Well... I guess I don't really have any excuse as to why this took so friggin' long except to say I've been having an awesome summer :P

Comments

[beathen]

This is so gorgeous. I love how sensual and wistful Gale and Randy are about their feelings for each other at first, but then they practically devour each other once the first kiss is delivered.

He rocks against me slowly, his belly pressing against my lengthening cock, and it feels so good, dull shadows of color expanding behind my eyes, I feel so taken, so wanted and needed...

This is so hot and yet they are totally clothed at this point.

I also love your references to time:

stop time for moments and...

It's a slow fuck, drawn out for an eternity

Beautiful.

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks so much for this... I love what you said about this fic :) I was trying to play with a sense of time in it - the time apart, time together, the feeling of moving in slow motion until everything clicks and the world speeds up.

And thanks also for pulling out that part - it's always so good to hear what works for readers!!

[zosha2003]

wish i could accurately describe the smile on my face - loved it

[xhaleslowly]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it :)

[mdlaw]

If I had read this which of course I didn't because that would be wrong I would say this is really wonderful. Even though it was somewhat sad, it was filled with hope. It made me feel good.

Oh Hey Ethan! waves. m :D

[xhaleslowly]

Hello, M! Wrong?? There's nothing wrong with RPS, is there? *grins*

Okay, okay, I know. But I just couldn't get this little idea out of my head. And it kind of closes the arc I left hanging open with the last RPS, so... well, that's my story and I'm stickin' to it! lol!

Thanks for comments - and I'm glad it made you feel good. That's what I wanted it to do :)

*waves to Ethan*

[tawny_7]

Hello there!

As usual I love your fic! I just want more! I don't want them apart, but I guess I can live with a maybe! I'd love to hear more of this.

Take care!

Re: *waves to Ethan*

[xhaleslowly]

Hello! Thanks so much for this - I'm honestly not sure if I'll have another RPS or not, but who knows ;) The encouragement is much appreciated :)

[xhaleslowly]

Aw, thanks so much for this, Tricia! And for letting me know you've been reading the old stuff... it's always good to hear that my fics still have a bit a life in them, even after they've been "published" :P

Thanks as always, darlin' :X