New Fic: First Time for Everything (1/10): B/J: NC-17

Sep 26, 2006 18:20

Well, I never thought I'd be saying this again, but I'm writing a new series :) Inspired by and dedicated to the wonderful paddies, I'm taking a crack at writing "the fic of her dreams" (yes, all 10!). Read her original request or just go right on into the fic!

Hope you enjoy it :)

First Time for Everything - Part 1 )

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beathen September 27 2006, 01:47:39 UTC
That was so incredibly hot! I'm so glad this is going to be a series so I can have a regular dose of cold showers such amazing writing. I only wish I could write as well as you! Your attention to detail and descriptions, as in all your fics, really make the story come alive for me. I particularly love how gentle Brian is with Justin. Wonderful job!

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xhaleslowly September 27 2006, 03:37:01 UTC
Aw, thank you so much for this, especially all your generous words about my writing. I particularly appreciate you mentioning the attention to detail... it's one thing I always try to achieve in my fics, so it's great to get this kind of feedback :)

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beathen September 27 2006, 03:43:49 UTC
I particularly appreciate you mentioning the attention to detail... it's one thing I always try to achieve in my fics

You don't try; you succeed with the details - it's what makes your stories so engaging to read. I practically hang onto every word that you write!

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xhaleslowly September 27 2006, 03:38:35 UTC
You're writing all 10?

Well, I'm gonna try my damndest, anyway :P

Thanks for the comment, sweetie :X :X :X

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eileen_donovan September 27 2006, 01:56:34 UTC
Ah, Ethan ... so, so good. You write such beautiful, sensual stuff and always fill it with the essence of Brian and Justin. And there is something very loving about everything you write that imbues each piece with a hopefulness that I love.

I also love that you show us the Brian that only Justin saw. Like this:

"Slow, s'okay, don't rush," he mumbles and pets your hair softly and you glance up at him, your eyes catching his and he rubs his thumb across the arch of your cheekbone, his eyes lazily closing as he leans his head back on the couch, and you know you're doing okay.

Really wonderful.

I am so *thrilled* to hear you're writing a series and I can't wait for the next installment!

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xhaleslowly September 28 2006, 04:34:49 UTC
Thank you for this, Eileen... it's so great to get this feedback and I just love what you said about my writing. I appreciate it all so much :X

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musicsexual September 27 2006, 01:59:26 UTC
ZOMG NEW ETHAN FICSERIES!

You've made my day, like always. That was hot and wonderful and as much as I planned to leave a decent comment, I'm now all flustered and incoherent. *melts*

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xhaleslowly September 28 2006, 04:35:19 UTC
lol! Thanks so much for this :) So glad you enjoyed it!!

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luciblue September 27 2006, 02:03:49 UTC
Ethan, you slay me everytime!

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xhaleslowly September 28 2006, 04:36:10 UTC
Aw, thanks for this :)

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