New Fic: First Time for Everything (2/10): B/J: NC-17

[xhaleslowly]

First off, I'd like to thank everyone so much for all the encouragement for the new series :) You guys are all so awesome and I can't thank you enough for the feedback. It totally keeps me going.

Also, big hugs to the amazing paddies who not only provided the inspiration for this series, but has also very generously made customized icons for each fic,

Comments

[_alicesprings]

Oh god. I'm not worthy. You = genius.

You captured early season 1 Justin so well. His inexperience but eagerness, his blind Brian devotion!

But then all of those things did happen and so you are here - exactly where you wanted to be anyway. Screw Babylon, it was nothing more than a means to an end.

You follow him up the stairs and into the loft and sit on the couch and watch as he eats an apple, and it's about the sexiest fucking thing you've ever seen... his mouth opening wide to take the apple inside, the crunch of his teeth biting into the fruit, the bubble of juice that sticks to his lips, his tongue flicking out to catch it.

He leans his head back on the chair and kicks his foot up to rest on the coffee table, pulling off his tie with one hand and devouring the apple with the other. You squirm a little, embarrassed that you can get a hard-on just from this, but then this is Brian, and fuck, everything he does is sexy.

and this:

"You coming?" he asks over his shoulder and you break into a grin, because well, you really

[xhaleslowly]

Aw sweetie, thank you so much for this - especially for your comments about the season 1 characterization... I realized I haven't actually written that much season 1 stuff before, so this is kind of new territory for me. But I will admit I'm having fun writing eager and inexperienced Justin :P

And that's so awesome you pulled out your favourite parts - I love it when readers let me know what they liked the best :)

[xhaleslowly]

LOL! Thanks so much, Tricia :X :X :X

[sapphire9977]

You slip inside him... just a little bit, just the tip of your tongue, but you're inside him now and your breath is catching in your throat and oh fuck you need to touch yourself, you wanna come like this, inside him, God, inside him, and you push your tongue in a little further and press your face into his crack, burying your nose in the soft hairs and opening your lips wide to cover his asshole and you suck a little and he sighs and you tongue him more, wriggling your tongue inside his hole, squirming it around inside him, making circles with it and coating him with your spit.

So.very.dead.

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks for this - and for letting me know you liked that part :P

[beathen]

I find it very amusing and wonderful how you bring our attention to certain details throughout your stories. In this case, Justin was going to be using his mouth and tongue to rim Brian, so you've included these references earlier in the story...

his mouth opening wide to take the apple inside, the crunch of his teeth biting into the fruit, the bubble of juice that sticks to his lips, his tongue flicking out to catch it.

...

He catches you letting your tongue swipe out across your lips at the sight of his bare chest and a smile pulls at the corner of his lips,

So awesome! Your Brian and Justin are always in character and it's great to see them set in the first season when Justin is still inexperienced in a lot of things. It's very refreshing.

Amazing job on chapter 2! I can't wait for the next part!

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks for noticing those details :) I try to weave as much as I can into these little stories, so it's always good to know that people pick up on it.

And thanks also for the comments about the characterization - going back to the first season has been challenging in terms of trying to "rewind" back to that time of inexperience and naivety, but it's been a fun challenge too.

Glad you're enjoying the fics!

[tawny_7]

Hey Ethan!

HOT as always!! I love the way you write B/J...I'm really glad you're writing again!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Take care!

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks so much for this :) Always appreciated!