New Fic: First Time for Everything (6/10): NC-17: B/J

[xhaleslowly]

Before I get into the fic, I'd like to send a very belated thank you to all the folks that sent me love at the QAF love meme a few weeks back. I'm sometimes out of the loop on these things, so apologies for the late response, but I want you guys to know how much it means to me and how much I truly appreciated it. It's that kind of generosity of

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[flamencanyc]

Yay, my bedtime story for tonight was just posted!
Thanks Ethan!

[xhaleslowly]

I hope it gives you sweet dreams, Flame :)

Enjoy!

[flamencanyc]

You have no idea. ;)

This was a stunningly beautiful chapter, Ethan. As always, you expertly convey all of the mixed emotions and sensations Justin has -- as opposed to just "ooh it's so hot," though of course, it is, incredibly so -- as would be expected in such a complex situation. And the gently powerful supervision and caring coming from Brian throughout is just gorgeous. You were also very successful at conveying a very different feeling here than that of the backroom -- a steamy, anonymous, naked, sought-out, open white darkness spawning amorphous writhing masses here as opposed to the loud, flashy, spontaneous, half-clothed, incidental, moody, black darkness housing rapid hook-ups there.

I know I am only one among many who have called you the porn king, but it's really so much more than that. You are brilliant at triggering all the senses and the mind; the master of conveying intense psychological, emotional, and physical sensuality with your words. Keep up the great work! And thank you so much.

♥ Flame

[xhaleslowly]

Aw Flame, thank you so much for your detailed feedback and generous comments. Getting this is truly a gift :) I'm very appreciative of all the things you said - and I'm so glad you get what you do from my writing :X

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks for this, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And I'm glad you got what you did from this fic - I've always tried to capture both the sexual and also the intimate nature between them with this series, so getting this feedback is much appreciated :)

[mi_nion]

*puffs cigerette*
Nice!

[xhaleslowly]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :)

[_alicesprings]

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Brilliant!

[xhaleslowly]

Lol - many thanks, sweetie :)

[xhaleslowly]

Aw, Cat. Thank you so much for this, and especially for all your very generous words on the meme. I've always been so grateful for the recognition and encouragement that I've received from this community, and it makes me feel amazing to hear that I'm able to entertain and hopefully brighten a day with a few of my words :)

A very heartfelt thank you to you, Cat :X