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May 24, 2005 07:53
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aboynamedkelly
May 24 2005, 06:01:07 UTC
while your punctuation and grammar has definately deteriorated a bit, your story telling skills and writing style has definately improved. A-.
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xhalsanx
May 24 2005, 06:09:30 UTC
damn fucking A minus. this is, as mike ness said so well, in that rockabliy voice i found so fucking hot when i was 17, the story of my life.
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aboynamedkelly
May 24 2005, 06:12:32 UTC
you only lost points for technicalities. you just need to proofread a little better and you'll have that A in no time.
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xhalsanx
May 24 2005, 06:23:07 UTC
do you think mike ness would take that shit as a response.
hell no he would punch a mirror with his make up on.
proofreading. the man was a musical genius.
you wanna tell him, or should i?
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pippalotta
May 24 2005, 09:14:06 UTC
extending the visa???? :( i fear I won't see you before I leave for iowa..
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hell no he would punch a mirror with his make up on.
proofreading. the man was a musical genius.
you wanna tell him, or should i?
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