I cannot tell you how much I am in love with the characterization. lovey dovey D18 unsettles me for some reason.. I think you've gotten them down perfect; their so-called relationship seems so painful and impossible, which I think is the best thing to portray. these drabbles have a bittersweetness to them. I enjoy your writing style, the sentences are precise and the dialogue, harsh, short, but sweet. I don't know if what I said made any sense but I DON'T CARE BECAUSE I LOVE THESE SO MUCH ;___________;
I totally get what you mean about lovey dovey D18 though. It irks me when I see Hibari being... well, responsive to Dino's advances in a uh positive way. Not that i mind, just... it gives me a funny feeling. Like, the not-horny positive responses or even when I see him smiling at Dino and not smirking at him.
XD I really appreciate the comment. Throughout the whole thing I felt like I was OOCing Hibari too much.
and thanks so much ;_; &hearts&hearts♥ Your comment made me really happy.
Ah, these were all wonderful. My favorite's definitely the second one because it makes me feel warm and fuzzy and happy and I have a weakness for hot cocoa. <3
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I cannot tell you how much I am in love with the characterization. lovey dovey D18 unsettles me for some reason..
I think you've gotten them down perfect; their so-called relationship seems so painful and impossible, which I think is the best thing to portray. these drabbles have a bittersweetness to them.
I enjoy your writing style, the sentences are precise and the dialogue, harsh, short, but sweet. I don't know if what I said made any sense but I DON'T CARE BECAUSE I LOVE THESE SO MUCH ;___________;
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I totally get what you mean about lovey dovey D18 though. It irks me when I see Hibari being... well, responsive to Dino's advances in a uh positive way. Not that i mind, just... it gives me a funny feeling. Like, the not-horny positive responses or even when I see him smiling at Dino and not smirking at him.
XD I really appreciate the comment. Throughout the whole thing I felt like I was OOCing Hibari too much.
and thanks so much ;_; &hearts&hearts♥ Your comment made me really happy.
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