Part VI Cruel Ending

Nov 07, 2004 21:34

Today is November 7th. I went into Ninos. There was no happy greeting, instead a glance and a head nod out the back door from Hosea before i clocked in. I followed him out ( Read more... )

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anonymous November 7 2004, 19:38:29 UTC
Now, is this still supposed to be a true story? Because I'm at a loss here.. You won't date him because he is "below your standards", yet you share a few close moments. {Not meaning sexual, but.. emotional closeness}.. And even say I love you??

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To my dear annoymos poster...::wink:: xhurtxbyxyoux November 7 2004, 20:40:36 UTC
Yes this has been a true story from begginning to end with plenty of editors cuts put in...I can not write absoutely every thing ya know? Its just irrelavent or unseemly. I never loved him necesarily but i did care for him but all at the same time while some of these intractions made me feel special they also made me feel nautios. Thats the kind of stuff i didnt write about... i wanted to only think abou the good parts...

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anonymous November 7 2004, 20:52:50 UTC
But then it isnt a true story. It just has some moments of truth, while the rest is buried deep within your own mind..

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xhurtxbyxyoux November 7 2004, 21:16:36 UTC
No the nausia was more when i was at home thinking about it. It is true it all happened... its like a life time story true story with dramatic affect:)

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anonymous November 8 2004, 02:10:46 UTC
Just plopping by and thought I'd comment. The ending is anticlimatic and disappointing. Your fantasies are more entertaining than your real life obviously.

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anonymous November 8 2004, 18:30:51 UTC
*nods* ok

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