causality

Jul 17, 2013 14:03

causality; the relation between a cause and an event.
~17,960K, kyuhae, sj-reel entry for pride and prejudice.

a/n: did you know there's a huge possibility that there might be a sequel to this ugh i don't even but here you go part two enjoy!

<- part I

Eventually, they close, but Kyuhyun doesn't stop singing. Not when he feels like it's all he has left. )

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summerrainsonme July 18 2013, 19:21:21 UTC
sadly, it's going to get a sequel! most probably! i mean, i have it written out in my head, so does that count? haha.

accents, man. /shotdead

thank you for reading! i'm glad you liked it! all those days of nosleepmustfinish and coffeecoffeecoffee paid off, haha. ...i procrastinated on this way too much, otl. ♥

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xcasssie July 18 2013, 21:15:39 UTC
Pride and Prejudice ! God, haven't seen that movie in a while, which is such a shame, since I liked it so much. Your story was seriously beautiful and don't even get me started on the psychological factor and the fucked up pasts and 'What do you want? What do you need?' /dead ( ... )

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kpopismy_drug July 20 2013, 10:59:44 UTC
Now here comes the hard part of organising my thoughts. Is it possible to further fall in love with your writing? No? Yes? I think yes. I don't why, but your writing has a calmness to it? Well, to me it does. I just got sucked into the characterisation, and just thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Now, Donghae's accent. I don't know why, but it reminded me too much of the Yorkshire accent, and since that accent is similar to my own, I had a ball saying Donghae's lines. But on a serious note, I loved loved how you incorporated the accent into the story and used it.

Will forever ♡ your work~~~

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ext_2075142 July 21 2013, 06:52:00 UTC
your story is beautiful as always. sorry i haven't been commenting all the while. thank you for writing! ♥

i love how you portrayed them here. and i really love the flow of the story. especially the confession from donghae ;;;

donghae's accent & kyu's singing ♥

sequel? i'll be looking forward! ^^

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ohmysuperjunior August 20 2014, 08:06:25 UTC
this fic is absoluteelyy amaziinggg. i'm usually a silent reader and though i have a lot of thoughts and i often have so many feels when reading sj fanfics, i don't really know how to express them properly enough. i love love love this story and i really like kyuhyun's character here. omg really looking forward to a sequel.

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