even the stars, they burn (some even fall to the earth)

Jan 20, 2013 20:34


even the stars, they burn (some even fall to the earth)
+kyuhae; ~5K ; pg-13.

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donghae is wandering. kyuhyun is his destination. )

pairing: kyuhae, rating: pg-13

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leorizanzel January 21 2013, 02:39:13 UTC
OMFG meimei this is so pretty. ;~; I love all of your descriptions and settings and ofdfjkrdfjlkdsfjlksdf yes

Donghae's devotion to Kyuhyun is both beautiful and heartbreaking (beautifully heartbreaking?) - he loves him so much that he can't stand to be away from him and does everything he can while Kyuhyun is a teasing bitch that forces him to go around the world for no reason uGH so many feels ;A; (And Kyuhyun would make someone fly all around the world to teach them a lesson because he is a prissy princess)

I loved all the locations (and I saw you with the St. Peter's Basilica reference lady I SAW YOU) and how you connected them to events in their lives together. It's really endearing because when you are with someone, everything becomes even more special in a way that only the two of you would ever understand.

I really don't know what more to say because I am rambling and keysmashing and being silly, but I really love this story and I love you. <3

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summerrainsonme January 21 2013, 02:52:15 UTC
eep i wanted to add more (like the forbidden city of beijing or something and maybe some place in new york D:) but then i was short of time and inspiration i didn't know how to continue the line of clues LOL

i see him as very loyal (....like a puppy) and yeah, that guy just has his head in the clouds all the time :'D

kyuhyun...kyuhyun is just a cute evil genius. how did he get all those clues so perfectly timed to donghae i have no idea OTL

wangfei guixian is a pampered princess donghae you need to stop indulging him

i tried to make him sort of sweet here though lol didn't work

THAT REFERENCE WAS BECAUSE OF YOU and the fact that i don't know rome like at all l o l I STILL WANNA VISIT SIGHS

...yeah. guess i just wanted one happy ending if i couldn't have my own. :'D the whole world is their little special secret though OTL

no your comment was beautiful thanks ;A; i think my reply became longer though omfg i love you more ♥

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i_nfinitely January 21 2013, 14:23:45 UTC
omg, the idea of donghae travelling all over the world to look for kyuhyun... this story was beautiful, ide ;www; i really like the way you write orz

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summerrainsonme January 21 2013, 15:13:59 UTC
thank you ;;; <3

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coffeeandyou January 21 2013, 16:12:46 UTC
This is....omg, just too sweet, I hold back any kind of emotion when the first time I read this coz I thought I would be another sad ending (u did great in broke my heart with ur last kyuhae fic huhuhuu) but yea just like what you said a happy ending and it really warms my heart, I'm happy ^⌣^ your idea bout wandering around the world (not that whole world, yeah kkk~) just to find someone special was propably kinda common, but your words, once again, your words that makes this story become amazingly sweet, soooo sweet and I LOVE IT, really. Thank you for writing this, Summerrainsonme, thank you ^^

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summerrainsonme January 21 2013, 18:17:24 UTC
another...sad...ending... :'D I need to stop writing sad endings then OTL i'm sorry /glues your heart back together ;;;

donghae will search the whole world for kyuhyun. that loyal puppy.

thank you for reading~

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harroween January 21 2013, 18:17:52 UTC
tears IN MY EYES
I THOUGHT YOU LIED TO ME I THOUGHT THERE WAS NO HAPPY ENDING
""THAT DAY WE FELL OUT OF LOVE"""

""HE'S LOST"""

NO0565K6506KOKOIOIOPIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

but then ahhhhhh donghae traveling the world to find kyuhyun is so, so cute and romantic anD IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY
and the way they meet AND DONGHAES DEVOTION TO KYUHYUN AND EVERYTHING SUMMER I

love you

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summerrainsonme January 21 2013, 18:24:24 UTC
ehEHEH WELL I DID SAY THERE WAS A HAPPY ENDING I TRIED RLLY HARD

ND IT WORKED OUT GOOD SO c:

everyone seems to really like that part :'D they're both insatiable wanderers otl LIKE I SAID HE'S A LOYAL PUPPY MAN LOOK AT DAT FACE

I

love you more c:

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subtleteas January 21 2013, 21:32:59 UTC
this was so, so cute and heartwarming. donghae searching the world for a kyuhyun who never went anywhere at all- ugh, my heart. ♥

and then the way that the picture of them was creased, like a reminder of their separation. and "that day we fell out of love". and "hyung, i always loved you". and dutiful kyu remaining in his father's bookstore. and how to donghae, home isn't a place. it's kyuhyun.
i just- ;__;

really beautiful story. thanks for writing.

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summerrainsonme January 21 2013, 22:36:03 UTC
kyuhyun's rather mean that way. but y'know, it's his childish way of saying that he really loves donghae and waiting all that time was horrible enough. :'D

if you want to understand it a bit more in comprehension, i have a note post on it here. :'D i also plan to make a little mini fic of all their travels that ties in with this story and hopefully makes everything make a little more sense? ;;;

thank you for reading! ♥♥♥

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