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oldwillow_brook June 26 2009, 08:51:41 UTC
YOUUUUUUU.

Okay OKAY. I never ever ever ever read Shinee with DBSK just because its kind of the petifile side considering as Jaejoong said he's 4 years older which makes the Shinee boys too young but from the first sentence I was hooked.

I love how Jaejoong is dead against it but for the sake of the relationship between Key and Jonghyun, he knew it would help the relationship in some way.

And omg JONGHYUN YOU CUTE ADORABLE DORK AND WANTING TO WAIT but Kibum's just thinking WTF DO ME ALREADY!

I like the conversation between Jonghyun and Jaejoong just because its so abrupt and consise and just so conversation like. I ♥ it.

asdfk THIS WAS 10,000 WORDS OF GREATNESS. GREATNESS! :DDD

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xiahbuns June 26 2009, 15:47:34 UTC
meeeee. dies. ♥

my original idea was just to have the jonghyun/jaejoong interaction, but as always the fic started changing on its own. i chose jonghyun because he's one of the oldest in shinee, and people seem to have difficulties with their ages.

i wanted it to seem like jaejoong started to see him as an adult because of his apology because, really, teenagers don't apologize for anything, dies. and that distinction kind of comforted jaejoong enough about his age to go for it. plus yoochun's pressure, rofl.

i think that both of them lack that brain-mouth connection, so they just kind of say the first thing that comes to mind, rofl.

thank you! i hadn't even planned for it to be this long, rofl! ♥

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mookyo June 26 2009, 12:16:52 UTC
awesome fic *__*
i thought jong was going to go for jae and leave key but i was wrong and i'm happy ;;

this goes to my mems :D

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xiahbuns June 26 2009, 15:51:49 UTC
actually, i wrote this fic because i wanted jaejoong and jonghyun together, so the jongkey was entirely unplanned! but i didn't want key to come off as a homophobe because i highly doubt he is, considering the way he acts. and once key had wiggled his way in there, i knew it was going to end in jongkey. D:

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it so much! ♥

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boomtrack June 26 2009, 14:52:28 UTC
Incredibly long and incredibly fun. ♥

This is the first time I've read SHINee in a fic, but I saw JaeChun and NC-17 and I couldn't really pass it up. I love how you wrote Jaejoong and Yoochun, and while I don't know much about the guys of SHINee yet, I gotta admit I adored how you wrote them, too.

Fantastic. :D My friends are going to tease me for reading SHINee soooo bad, though.

But yes. Really just, top quality, this.

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xiahbuns June 26 2009, 15:54:57 UTC
thank you! ♥

ah, sorry, that's a little deceiving, isn't it? D: i wanted this fic to be entirely about jonghyun and jaejoong, but i couldn't split up the soulmates, rofl. so key wormed his way in too. D:

rofl, it's not so bad! dies. i'm honored you read despite not being into shinee! ♥

thanks so much!! ♥

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purplesky June 26 2009, 16:53:53 UTC
You can tease cause you and bamsu are evil like that. XD!!

BTW you totally need to go look at Twitter. <3

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xiahbuns June 26 2009, 17:47:02 UTC
thanks!

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xiahbuns June 26 2009, 17:51:41 UTC
sajdsak thank you! i'm personally not that into them having sex either, but i think it was important to the fic to have jonghyun learn not to be afraid of it, and yeah. dies.

thanks! i wish i could have done more with them, but it wasn't really central to the fic. you can probably expect more soulmates from me in the future, now that i'm done with this, rofl.

i'm glad you liked it! thanks so much! ♥

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