creativity; gen, onew/everyone, onew/taemin

Dec 28, 2009 13:05

Title: Creativity
Pairing: Gen, Onew/Everyone, Onew/Taemin
Rating: PG
3757 w.

A/N: thanks to all the people who pushed me to finish this. ;__; i probably would have left it for dead w/o you. ♥ also, becca, thanks for the beta! clings to you!

Jinki created four people in his lifetime, each one different from the next, each one taking something ( Read more... )

fandom: shinee, rating: pg, pairing: onew/taemin, length: oneshot, pairing: general

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njrv16 December 28 2009, 23:24:09 UTC
OMG this is so awesome and creative.
I'm in love with it!!!!
It was so cleverly written the way each off them was created ^_^
and LOL!! so much at Kibum's part of course he would be snappy even when he has no idea what is going on XD

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xiahbuns December 29 2009, 03:29:31 UTC
:D thank you! i'm glad you liked it!! ♥

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xiahbuns December 29 2009, 03:29:59 UTC
sobs, thank you!! ♥

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nautisch December 29 2009, 00:27:59 UTC
sobbing I seriously could not stop reading this once I started, it was so captivating. I'm sure everyone else has told you this but it is so unique and good and you didn't change them to fit the concept at all. which kind of made it heartbreaking, especially with jongkey. and the ontae part was just adorable and then I scrolled down and there wasn't anymore and I was so sad. I wanted more ontae gdi, but whatever SHOWERS YOU WITH LOVE AND AFFECTION FOR THIS FIC.

It only took two months for Kibum to materialize. After that, Jinki hardly saw Kibum at all. And even if he never saw them, he knew from the talk during class and in the halls that Kibum and Jonghyun were always together. They were best friends; it didn’t matter that Jinki was the one who created them.

But it should have. Jinki made them to be his friends, not each other’s.
SO FUCKING HEARTBREAKING STOP THIS. also it fits so much that jjong materializes from warmth and touch, bawww. :3

I'm not even going to read this comment over because I know it's embarrassing, but.

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xiahbuns December 29 2009, 03:33:27 UTC
i will write more ontae, ok! eventually, or something. :| shifts awkwardly. but yes, i am glad you liked it!! :'D

thank you for the ridiculously qt comment, sobs. ♥

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eijifujiryoma December 29 2009, 00:45:14 UTC
Aww, I just adored this. I nearly cried when Jonghyun left (how dare he! Poor, poor Jinki) but it turns out better in the end. Yay! XP Kibum was perfect.
I don't, however, get the 'friends to not-friends and back to friends' thing. Then again, I usually make my own assumptions so maybe that's just it. *sighs* Still love it though! Jinki is so <3!!!! I feel so sorry for him. T-T
Anyway, the ending was super cute. Too bad it was too short. XD

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xiahbuns December 29 2009, 03:34:20 UTC
idk, it's just implied. everyone drifts away from friends sometimes, you know? :3

but thank you! i'm glad you liked it! ♥

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andivide December 29 2009, 02:11:57 UTC
beams. i knew you could do it. i love it sfm. ♥

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xiahbuns December 29 2009, 03:35:59 UTC
clings to you! ;___; tysm! ♥

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