Decisions, Chapter 1

[xie_xie_xie]

This is the first chapter of Decisions, the sequel to Plans. You do need to read Plans first to follow the story. I would tell you this is going to be a three part series but last time that prediction didn't quite work so I'll just say, this is probably one of three or four.

The two stories slightly overlap in timeline, but Decisions continues

Comments

[shadownyc]

This is absolutely fabulous!!!

I love the way your POV's build the story...you handle them masterfully without having us backtrack unnecessarily.

I think Brian discussing personal "stuff" with Ted makes so much sense. Brian & Ted make excellent friends, but for Brian to venture into the uncharted waters seeking Ted's advice seems quite a major step forward. Of course, he wouldn't have done it without some serious alcohol in his bloodstream.

I love the lines from Ted (BTW--An excellent Ted voice):

Brian, you need to talk this over with Justin...when the blood levels in your alcohol have risen Perfect & funny--soooo Ted

I also loved: Although everyone already knows at the end.

Outstanding continuation! I look forward to seeing the direction you decide to take this topic and keep it IC. :D

[xie_xie_xie]

Thank you for the detailed feedback you crack pusher. I leave the suspense to besame_bj, who does it so well and who I hate for making me and Justin suffer so much, where I will take this topic is to a happy ending.

Of course, how we get there... that's the fun part.

[shadownyc]

I love the ride you took us on in Plans, so I'm sure I'll adore this one. Good fic is my crack.

[intensefemme]

Hi Shadow *waves*
I love the lines from Ted (BTW--An excellent Ted voice):
ITA
They do make most excellent friends.

[sassy111]

I was so glad to see this when I got home tonight:)

I really enjoyed reading "Plans" and can tell already that this is going to be even better.(if that's possible;))

The banner is great.

[xie_xie_xie]

I'm really glad you like the banner... KT is a genius.

[sassy111]

Dang it ... now you are turning *me* into a (banner) feedback whore! Geesh. If I wasn't having so much fun, I'd say let's go back to the line in the sand friendship. NOT

[xie_xie_xie]

You can never go back.... even if I wanted to which I so don't. ;)

[xie_xie_xie]

ROFLMAO... you perv!

[xie_xie_xie]

Thank you! I love Ted so much. I thought and thought of some way to do this story with a Ted POV, but of course, he's just not in a position to be that intimate with them for it to work.

I do have a vacation!fic in mind where it will work, though. Either that or I bring back Mel. Brian snarks with the best of them, but he keeps getting stoned and then passing out. ;)

[lunachickk]

OMGYAY! I LOVE IT! The whole scene at the end with Ted is just perfect.

So, please tell me that you are shunning your real work to frantically write more of this... ;)

[xie_xie_xie]

Yeah, I tell you that and then someone tells the people who pay me for stuff and the next thing you know I'm unemployed.

Of course, then I'd have TONS of time to write....

[lunachickk]

Okay, so then, how about we just keep it a secret between you and me?

I won't tell. *giggle*

[xie_xie_xie]

*giggles*

OK!