she listened to the song she wrote to bring her back to how she felt that day (she wanted to tell him <3)
the inspiration inside her heart reached out its arms and grabbed her
with him a home isn't a house with bathrooms and living rooms and pictures of evolving sons and daughters
it's them
it's knowing that's how they were meant to be their whole loves all this time
when she holds his hand she sees smaller ones and looks at their feet untied shoes and sesame street socks
and they were best friends they shared nightmares and hugged all the time though not in the same way as now she would love him then as much as child possibly could
I guess I was still tired last night, because I just reread it and it made perfect sense. Last night I felt like the poem was almost in 2 unconnected parts, but I don't see that at all now. I don't even know where one part would end and the other begin.
I am in total awe of this poem, I love it! I can feel and see every word, because its how I feel when I'm around you, like a happy child with no fear, no worries, just love =)
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to fear pain
sadness
getting lost
love
death
God
she listened to the song she wrote
to bring her back to how she felt that day
(she wanted to tell him <3)
the inspiration inside her heart
reached out its arms and grabbed her
with him
a home isn't a house
with bathrooms
and living rooms
and pictures of evolving sons and daughters
it's them
it's knowing that's how they were meant to be
their whole loves
all this time
when she holds his hand
she sees smaller ones
and looks at their feet
untied shoes and sesame street socks
and they were best friends
they shared nightmares
and hugged all the time
though not in the same way as now
she would love him then
as much as child possibly could
and not be afraid
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I am in total awe of this poem, I love it! I can feel and see every word, because its how I feel when I'm around you, like a happy child with no fear, no worries, just love =)
I love you beautiful!
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