some more mindless chatter...
i wrote some more poems, and i wanna get feedback on which is your favorite.
+Why+
i hate how its all so black and white
its either this or that
nothings inbetween
you can't compromise
you can't lean to my side
even tho i give my all
and do anything for you
you wont budge
you stubborn son of a bitch
you wont move
you wont do anything until its all yours
until you get your way
i just wanna know why?
why you cant do this for me
why i spend so much time on you
why you dont give back
why am i wasting time
why?
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+Lost Loves+
the night light bounces around
like kids near a fire
singing songs in the night
as if no one was there
not knowing what is lurking beyond
creatures as dark as the night sky
creatures holding the scent of you
demons holding the voice of long lost loves...
*****************
+How could you?+
how could you ever think you were the one?
i'm so young and unafraid
its too soon to tell, and too late for you...
how could you dare cross that line?
you were so young and stupid
the risk was too little for you, and nothing to me...
how could you assume everything was alright?
you didn't care much to look on the inside
the sanity was there, then it disappeared
the sanity was there, then it disappeared...
*****************
+Too late+
you throw it away like junkyard scrap
like i'm just another flash in the pan
it meant nothing to you, i can tell
no matter how much you deny it
you hate me, every bit of me
and its ok, cuz i hate you too
i hope it's ok that i wish you would die
I just thought i should run that by you
just incase it doesnt go by the rules
of your so-called-life
sorry i messed it up
cuz it was ohh so perfect, wasn't it?
too bad i didn't fit in
too bad, i hate you
too bad, i hope you die
too bad, its too late...
*******************
+Shadows+
Shadows still
the light breeze on my face
memories of you
creep back into me
haunting me
and everything i do
why are they there?
why are you here?
the time was precious
not to you
to me
everything i held
near and dear
my knuckles were white
holding on so much
grasping every last breath you took
i wish you the best
on your journey in life
i hope you die old
cuz only the good die young...
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Again: please comment and tell me your opinions and which one you like the most. Thanks.
<3 Steph :-)
+Why+
i hate how its all so black and white
its either this or that
nothings inbetween
you can't compromise
you can't lean to my side
even tho i give my all
and do anything for you
you wont budge
you stubborn son of a bitch
you wont move
you wont do anything until its all yours
until you get your way
i just wanna know why?
why you cant do this for me
why i spend so much time on you
why you dont give back
why am i wasting time
why?
****************
+Lost Loves+
the night light bounces around
like kids near a fire
singing songs in the night
as if no one was there
not knowing what is lurking beyond
creatures as dark as the night sky
creatures holding the scent of you
demons holding the voice of long lost loves...
*****************
+How could you?+
how could you ever think you were the one?
i'm so young and unafraid
its too soon to tell, and too late for you...
how could you dare cross that line?
you were so young and stupid
the risk was too little for you, and nothing to me...
how could you assume everything was alright?
you didn't care much to look on the inside
the sanity was there, then it disappeared
the sanity was there, then it disappeared...
*****************
+Too late+
you throw it away like junkyard scrap
like i'm just another flash in the pan
it meant nothing to you, i can tell
no matter how much you deny it
you hate me, every bit of me
and its ok, cuz i hate you too
i hope it's ok that i wish you would die
I just thought i should run that by you
just incase it doesnt go by the rules
of your so-called-life
sorry i messed it up
cuz it was ohh so perfect, wasn't it?
too bad i didn't fit in
too bad, i hate you
too bad, i hope you die
too bad, its too late...
*******************
+Shadows+
Shadows still
the light breeze on my face
memories of you
creep back into me
haunting me
and everything i do
why are they there?
why are you here?
the time was precious
not to you
to me
everything i held
near and dear
my knuckles were white
holding on so much
grasping every last breath you took
i wish you the best
on your journey in life
i hope you die old
cuz only the good die young...
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Again: please comment and tell me your opinions and which one you like the most. Thanks.
<3 Steph :-)