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OP: Honeymooners

Sep 20, 2016 20:48

Title: Honeymooners
For: OP
Pairing(s): very brief Junmyeon/Zitao, Yixing/Krystal
Rating: NC-17
Length: 3,104
Summary: Alpha newlyweds go on their honeymoon
Warnings: knotting, biting with blood
Author's note: literally just an excuse to write sappy a/b/o a/a clichéd honeymoon sex porn. Hope you all enjoy!

( It had been the event of the year for the city, the joining of the two largest local packs through marriage, a local celebrity wedding. )

#round 2, rating: nc-17

Comments 4

dubudork September 22 2016, 07:34:06 UTC

Oh I like that little twist that the bigger packs are treated almost as local celebrities, it added a nice touch to the story I think! I liked how well you captured the characters personalities as well, especially that their sense of possessiveness shows a little differently, Minseok being more quiet but assertive and Sehun being a bit more clingy almost. Great job!

saphyea October 9 2016, 22:23:23 UTC

It's the first time I read an abo fic with two alphas together, it was a nice change! I also loved the characterization, they were so cute ahaha (and hot)

vixxo_93 November 23 2016, 18:37:18 UTC

Any a/b/o dynamic with Minseok and Sehun always delivers because they both have strong features and diverse personalities.
Way too often Minseok is portrayed as the small cute omega so its a great change to have them both alphas, strong and capable

Thanks for writing!!!

anonymous December 19 2016, 16:53:45 UTC

I love this take on urban pack structures. Kinda like gangs but less inherently violent- it's cool af
Also love the fact that they're both alphas with some sense of aggression/dom while still keeping little stupid quirks and small vulnerabilities.
This dynamic is exactlyyy why I love xiuhun rlly
(Also!! Loved the side pairings but beta couple xing/Krystal especially)