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fanfiction - Lost (Sawyer/Juliet)

Feb 11, 2010 17:37

Title: You are at the docks
Characters/Pairings: Sawyer/Juliet
Rating: PG
Summary: You are sitting at the front part of the dock, watching several unknown men loading yet another sub. It’s become some sort of a ritual for you.
Notes: prompt came from carlyisnot, beta-ed by f3iv3lin3; thank you both so much for pushing me to write which I haven't done in aaaages ( Read more... )

tv: lost, fanfiction

Comments 8

f3iv3lin3 February 11 2010, 17:00:56 UTC

Haha you're very welcome, I'm good at pushing xD

*sigh* what an awesome line to finish LMAO xD

No seriously, very nice story and I really enjoyed reading it despite the fact it's a Suliet fic and in the 2nd person xD Keep going, I wanna read MOAR xD

xixlovexgreenx February 11 2010, 17:02:21 UTC

lol Talking about being pushy, huh? xD

LOL IKR, some very awesome person helped me. ;)

Thanks :D

bsofthewest February 11 2010, 19:02:03 UTC

Perhaps this was perfect!

xixlovexgreenx February 11 2010, 19:04:27 UTC

Aww thank you so much! :) I'm glad you liked it!

ale_la_pazza1 February 11 2010, 20:25:12 UTC

Amazing! :D

xixlovexgreenx February 11 2010, 20:31:16 UTC

Aw thank you very much :D

carlyisnot February 12 2010, 03:37:19 UTC

I was so glad to see this come up on my f list today!!! Wow! I'm so glad you are writing for lost. You really capture Juliet perfectly, just get inside her head so well, all her thoughts and questions, it's brilliant. Can really feel she is so torn between whether to stay or go, when neither option is really ideal. And that she is kinda hurt that Sawyer had kissed her then been avoiding her. I like her insights into Sawyers behaviour, thinking he kissed her as he didnt want to be abandoned and left alone. And that even though she thinks it, she is forgiving, knowing that in the same situation she would do crazy things too ( ... )

xixlovexgreenx February 12 2010, 13:26:49 UTC

Awww, thank you so much! :) I found it strangely difficult to write Juliet, I thought it would be easier, idk. But James was easier than expected although I was never entirely sure how to phrase his dialogue lol So I just tried to go with how I feel for Juliet, how I understand her. Plus, some input by Elizabeth herself. xD

As I said above the dialogue was what I was most worried about so I'm glad you liked that. :D

Woohooo, I can make people like Sawyer even though they don't like him! Yay :D So thanks again, love. <3