And yet another....

Sep 04, 2006 13:43



If Art I Am To You....

Paint me not in oils and hues

But whispered breaths of “I love you”

Sculpt me not in clay and sand

But in your mind with the palm of your hand

Sing of me not in harmony and rhyme

But with your laughter and tears each day at a time

Dance for me not in cemented step

But in leaps of grace unknown yet

Photograph me not ( Read more... )

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fourfreedoms September 4 2006, 19:27:33 UTC
Whoa, you blow me away, my friend.

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xjessica_faithx September 4 2006, 20:00:41 UTC
Awwww that's so sweet thank you!
*hugs*

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normaniac September 5 2006, 15:41:23 UTC
That's so.. exalted. And beautiful, I ove it

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normaniac September 5 2006, 15:42:16 UTC
L O V E :D

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xjessica_faithx September 5 2006, 19:07:59 UTC
:)

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xjessica_faithx September 5 2006, 19:07:48 UTC
I'm so happy you like it.
Thank you!
*smile*

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chardonneret_1 September 5 2006, 18:50:00 UTC
I LOVED it Jess!
So beautiful.
I know I say this all the time lol but this is my fave poem of yours so far!!!!!!
It really is beautiful.
Tres bon ma cherie.

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xjessica_faithx September 5 2006, 19:11:06 UTC
*blushes*
Your favorite so far? Does that mean I'm getting better? lol
It really means a lot that you liked it!
Thank you so much!

*hugs*

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roguemouse September 5 2006, 22:20:39 UTC
Wow... this poem is such a beauty!
Not only is the composition great, but the idea of "the art of love"? BRILLIANT!
You continue to amaze me, girl! Over and over again. And always for the better ^_^

husg :*
PS. What'ya been up to lately?

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xjessica_faithx September 5 2006, 22:36:33 UTC
*huge smile*
*pounce squeeze*
Oh it’s so good to hear from you!
I was staring to think we lost you for a while.

*blushes*
I amaze Mouse! *bounces*
Oh thank you so much, I'm really glad you like it!

Nothing much with me, just going to school and trying to find a job lol
Right now I'm stalling because I don’t want to write me English paper lol

How have you been?

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roguemouse September 5 2006, 22:54:54 UTC
*Is tackled to the ground* Air...I need air! ^_^
Why did you think you lost me? I'm sure I updated my LJ about a week ago (or something around that).

You should feel proud - I'm not easily amazed *that sounds a bit snotty, don't it :P*
But I love all your poems, nonetheless.

I've been good... looking for a job too, but mostly hanging out with my friends and waiting for my classes to begin. I absolutely DREAD starting colleauge *dreads*

hugs :*

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xjessica_faithx September 5 2006, 23:02:14 UTC
*stands up, helps you off ground* Sorry about that!
I know it's weird, it just seems like I have not talked to you in a while.

*beams*
Not snotty, just honest lol

How far is your college away from your home, are you going to live on campus?

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karine_ September 7 2006, 00:01:10 UTC

I don't know if you mind me letting a comment here, but I discovered your LJ via the michaelandbrian community and what you are writing is... awesome. Sincerely you are taking my breath away with this.

Simply beautiful. You have a way with words ^^

Mind if I friend you, I would love to have you as a LJ-friend ;)

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xjessica_faithx September 7 2006, 02:01:24 UTC
Oh no I don't mind at all, it’s a real treat to have someone new comment!

*beams*
Thank you so much, it’s very nice of you to say!
I'm very pleased you enjoy it!

Of course you can friend me. I'm going to friend you as well if that’s ok.
:)

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karine_ September 7 2006, 14:16:21 UTC

I'm very glad that you wanna friend me too and I don't mind at all.

By the way I just saw that your b-day is in April: the 19. Mine is 10 days later ;)We must be connected somewhere ^^

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xjessica_faithx September 7 2006, 18:47:15 UTC
lol
We must be!

We should have a little lj celebration when our birthdays roll around. lol

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