the turning of a dead man

[xjollyrogerx]

i once thought i was alive but it was only in my sleep. i died as i awoke to wipe the sweat from off my cheek. the gasps i take in are a trifel in the end, when the air i breath is wholly undeserving of that trend

Comments

[ethnic_m]

Reading that pricked something in me. like it's something that i needed to hear, something i need to change...

once again, God speaks through your words.

[xjollyrogerx]

<3

[lightmanx5]

Senues? Sinews?

~JOSh-X

[xjollyrogerx]

heh.. yeah, I ment sinews.

[lightmanx5]

(Sorry! I didn't mean for this to be my only comment. I was commenting from work, and was short on time. So I read it, and just threw that out there real fast!.)

~JOSh-X

[masticatus]

that's probbaly my favorite thing you've written. well done.

[xjollyrogerx]

really? thanks.