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Naruto: Sasuke x Naruto - Pet Talk

Sep 15, 2006 16:19

"Sasuke..." Naruto whined, rolling over to the side to get a better view of his lover.

No response.

He tried again, raising his voice just a little higher in case Sasuke didn't hear him the first time.

Still no response.

Growling, Naruto pushed himself off his back and cast an irritated glance at Sasuke who was currently working on a report ( Read more... )

55themes, challenge, naruto, sasuke x naruto

Comments 5

animegoil September 16 2006, 02:15:35 UTC

Lol, that is cute! I felt Sasuke was a bit OOC, but for the cuteness of the fic (and the already OOC factor of Sasuke being Naruto's boyfriend, lol) it was alright.
Pochi. I vote calling him that anyday.

tofumice September 16 2006, 02:56:48 UTC

Hahahahaha. That was cute. Naruto seemed as airheaded as ever. Great job.

tinzedesu September 16 2006, 07:16:02 UTC

What an adorable fic and an adorable!Sasuke you have there. Hahaha. :) It's SOOOOO cute. :P

trekiael September 17 2006, 01:43:49 UTC

Mouahahaha! Sasuke want to play! For a moment there, I was dead sure Sasuke was gonna make a comment on how Naruto could always play with Sasuke's 'pet', but hey, he might not be THAT pervert! XD o.ô Wouldn't it be a little disturbing for Naruto to have a pet dog who's Sasuke and have him called Pochi? I mean, imagin, they're having fun, Sasuke as a dog, then Sasuke want to molest Naruto, turn back human, do so, and Naruto moan Pochiiiii! O.O OMFG! Mouahahaha. Anyway, good job. I was worried it would turn into the classical Naruto want a pet and he somewhat convince Sasuke. I've read good drabbles about this idea, but I really fancy yours. Why having a pet when you can have such a good ninja lover, hum? Ok, that's it. Bye!

mija711 September 18 2006, 09:36:44 UTC

lol I really liked this, can I call you pochi?? omg that was hilarious I liked the fact that although Sasuke wouldnt allow naruto to get a pet cause he didnt want to have to work for naru's attention he was willing to be a pet for his love too cute I totally adore this, was well written and well done, ty for the great read, huggles and smiles mija...:-)