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Chapter Ten, "Sadface"

Jul 21, 2009 00:38

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Chapter 10, "Sadface"

CHRISTOPHERXlormp was kind enough to let me take Frig off to her bedroom to talk about The Plan. Granted, it was a plan full of more holes than a book by Louis Sachar, but I figured I'd take what I could get because when would I get a chance like this again? Frig ( Read more... )

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anonymous July 21 2009, 06:14:29 UTC

The holes reference WINZ MY LIFE.
First comment?

anonymous July 21 2009, 06:18:40 UTC

And here are some not-just-glancing-at-the-first-paragraph-thoughts.
Awwwww, Christopher. I've always been very fond of the chapters where Frig acts like a real human being (ironic, as she is now becoming an Alien-thing) and this once was as touching as the rest.
Can't wait to see how Hector reacts to the baby.

easilyentranced July 21 2009, 06:28:37 UTC

Maybe he'd forget all about the fact that he'd let me "impregnate" her and it would just be a great night we could share together before I let her go forever.

It might be 2am and I might be about to start my monthly cycle, but that line almost made me cry… poor Christopher.

I will kill him eleven times.

Hahahahaha! Okay, I’m happy again.

This chapter did so many things for me that that other crappy not as popular series' chapter did. It made me want Frig to keep the baby instead of making me want to rip Stephanie Meyer's face off, you know?

random_nexus July 23 2009, 17:49:03 UTC

You could still rip her face off, not that many people would mind, I don't think.

Well, not too many.

Okay, not ME.

auracel July 21 2009, 06:41:37 UTC

Aaaahahahaha, "dangling but". XD

SEE YOU DID IT YAY I SHOULD REALLY GO TO BED NOW.

teacupfish July 21 2009, 06:55:01 UTC

Hmmmm....so Frig is losing her hotness and her superficiality, and Christopher disapproves? I'm beginning to think both she and Xlormp are shallow.

tallybonker July 21 2009, 14:06:31 UTC

But that's all she has to attract people. Hotness! Who loves characters who are nasty fat?

4you_blue_jway July 21 2009, 07:00:41 UTC

Aw, poor Chris and poor Frig too. Poor everyone.
I feel for these characters a lot more than I did with...the other series.

"she may actually be a better alien than she was a person"

That was the epic line there, I think.

Love this, as always, even the sad bits. ♥